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AkiTorrien
11-30-2008, 11:09 PM
I use to be everywhere
now my world has drifted.
I use to be so confused
now my life has shifted.
I use to be so confused
It made me lose my mind.
I use to be walkin' - on so many paths
Now it's down to one.


I found my chance, my life, my space
inside your life.
Now i'm grateful, happily and so content in my mind
I found a friend I could rely on, to count on thought those times.
A friend who is always there for me, and never left me so
So I thank you, yes I do.
For everything I need, all I need, all thats there - I have because of you,
So thank you, yes thank you.
For all that I need.

soulten
11-30-2008, 11:13 PM
*eyegasm*
That is an amazing poem! You are an amazing writer!

Ryuuzaki
11-30-2008, 11:15 PM
Wow! Very touching. I really enjoyed reading this. As Soulten said, amazing poem from an amazing writer. Or close enough to what he said. >.>

AkiTorrien
11-30-2008, 11:24 PM
Omg =D Thank you both!

fejknick
12-01-2008, 02:57 AM
Very nice one.
Keep it up!

Ashiya
12-01-2008, 03:53 AM
Wow!

Nice job on the poem.

Do you have any more?

:cute:

Holly-Sama
12-01-2008, 05:04 PM
I wish someone would write me a poem like that.