one of my poems

[Guardgirl]

Just a Dream
By: Allyson Stalnaker

I silt my wrists one last time,
I let the blood run down my fingers,
It’s dripping on the floor.
Finally this pain will stop.
I step into my bath tub full of water,
I sit there and watch the blood turn the water red.
This is my way out….

I WANT OUT!
I can’t take this life anymore.

I start to feel my consciousness slip away.
My mind wanders and my head slides down into the water.
I am holding my breath…..

My lungs are burning for air but I wont let myself come up.
I shut my eyes tight and then there is nothing…

I feel like my body is floating … and then I hear a voice.
I have heard this voice before,
But I can’t tell who it is.

The voices fade and I am falling
I scream……

I wake up and it was all just a dream…….


(i know it is sorta emo but I hope yall like it)

[Orangeii]

i agree 100% on the last part of being emo. Anyways it was interesting.

[fejknick]

The voices fade and I am falling
I scream my lungs out and fade away.

That ending is way better.

[lee matsu]

bla .......................

[Guardgirl]

I like that thanks

[soulten]

A little to emo-ish for me.

[Guardgirl]

ya i was a little over the top

[BuBBl3s]

i like the poem..sometimes i feel the same..but not AS emo :P but keep it up