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jyuukai
11-13-2008, 11:35 PM
A new hope in love
Stands amongst the crowd,
With her beauty and voice
Matching that of angels,
Her intellect and wisdom
Stumps the best of lecturers,
Yet a cloud of darkness hovers over her,
Protecting both body and mind.
Only she knows and only her true hope of love
Will reveal her princess-like reflection...

Lady Earth
11-18-2008, 06:40 PM
awww Jyuu this is so sweet. I like it

conigwolf
11-18-2008, 08:04 PM
I give two thumbs up

CloudX21
11-18-2008, 08:42 PM
yea it's pretty good.

dokuyume
11-27-2008, 09:40 PM
I liked this as well... I can relate...

salmeria
11-27-2008, 09:42 PM
it's really sweet jyuu ^_^

giovanni r
11-27-2008, 10:12 PM
Who's the lucky girl?!?!?!

jyuukai
11-29-2008, 12:22 AM
Who's the lucky girl?!?!?!

How'd you figure it out? You all are sharper than I expected!

meraychan
11-29-2008, 10:57 AM
oh nice...love it...^^

BuBBl3s
12-01-2008, 11:19 PM
this poem was..AWESOME!!!:happy:
keep it up :P

Neophoenix
12-06-2008, 02:18 PM
Its good keep it up