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stanmarsh
11-07-2008, 01:45 AM
Been a while since my last poem so I wrote this one
Sorrow
Don't walk my path the path of Sorrow
The sullen path not to be followed
After walking you can't turn back
You can't make up for all of the love you lack
You'll walk alone, trust me it was to hard to bare
Your heart will be broken way beyond repair.
So trust me please for your own sake
don't take the path I was forced to take
Tell me what you think about number 8
runt32a
11-07-2008, 02:03 AM
thats really good i like it Stanmarsh
animex09
11-07-2008, 02:06 AM
nice poem, i feel touched -looks back- who the hell just touched me?!
AkiTorrien
11-09-2008, 05:13 AM
Your Poem, Stanmarsh was very touching. I think you are very good at it *nods*
meraychan
11-09-2008, 09:41 AM
a wonderful poem...^_^
Klay Vampy
11-09-2008, 11:19 PM
Beautiful Stan! I love the work and i'm glad that you put up some more poems. ^_^
leoern
11-10-2008, 08:00 PM
kick ass as always lane keep it up
Zieghart
11-20-2008, 09:52 PM
:crying: IT WAS AWESOME.....
AnimeAlice
11-20-2008, 10:13 PM
OMG Stan, :D you rock!
hmm, you should become a poet.
stanmarsh
11-24-2008, 02:19 AM
thanx for all your support guys i love you all so much it would blow your mind