PDA

View Full Version : My Literary Expression


jyuukai
11-06-2008, 09:57 PM
"Fire"
Fire fire everywhere,
Using up the human's air,
Darkness comes and fills
Them with fright,
A burnt house
Shall bring the light.
When it fell burnt to the ground
It left a small ashy mound...

"**Kashe"
Be filled with Kashe
When someone dies,
As you know that
They have tried.
To fulfill their purpose
With each breath
That led to their
Ultimate death...

**I know a few of you, if not all, will ask what 'Kashe' is. 'Kashe' is a term I read in a book that was set in a fantasy world. The ppl there used it to mean happiness or elation

atomsk
11-06-2008, 10:37 PM
wow nice rhyme on "fire"

Vakarak
11-06-2008, 11:24 PM
-snaps fingers- I remember that fire poem... you scarred the english teacher with it -.-
but kashe...hmmmmmmmm that somehow looks as if it applies to me...

jyuukai
11-07-2008, 11:10 PM
-snaps fingers- I remember that fire poem... you scarred the english teacher with it -.-
but kashe...hmmmmmmmm that somehow looks as if it applies to me...

I changed a few words in Fire. When I first wrote it, it was meant to be a spell for a witch in a story.

Kashe on the other hand was written in my early emo days...

Holly-Sama
11-09-2008, 01:30 AM
Huh, nice job.

AkiTorrien
11-09-2008, 05:12 AM
I like them both but My fave out of the two was "Fire"