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zrikin
11-03-2008, 12:57 AM
Thunder
Thunder arrives
Boom!!comes the thunder
It rumbles and racks
You dont know where it comes from but u still hear the sound
Thunder leaves
Waste
11-03-2008, 06:44 PM
Not bad, could be longer. Try and make it flow a bit more. x
Raven
11-03-2008, 07:06 PM
Haikus are easy,
But sometimes they don't make sense.
Refrigerator.
stanmarsh
11-04-2008, 01:55 AM
Hikus = awesome sauce em
AkiTorrien
11-05-2008, 02:28 AM
I really like the imagery that i am getting from reading your poem ^.^ Keep them up! Short but sweet!
leoern
11-05-2008, 09:28 PM
pretty good josh
zrikin
11-12-2008, 12:32 AM
nice poem oh wait its my poem
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