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atomsk
11-01-2008, 03:15 AM
i dont do this much. when i write i speek in metaphors. so try to keep up.

from the heavens runs a thin white line of terror and destruction. it drops and strikes its target bringing it to ashes as if it were smitten by the hand of some all mighty benafactor. gods hand recedes to its retreat faster than the eye can follow. its roar rushes across the land like the roar of a tiger striking its prey down. and several years later, from the scar left by the violent wrath of the hand, sprouts new life.

ohh a happy ending you got luckier than usual

RACHER
11-01-2008, 06:16 AM
Being Lucky Is Good But It Is The Way You Control Your Life

LoKiWorlD
11-01-2008, 07:02 AM
That was really good, Atomsk. Do you have anymore?

atomsk
11-01-2008, 09:13 PM
maybee maybee im doing something more in depth with story and plot with conflicts

shiro
11-02-2008, 12:58 AM
its nice...but when i read it, it's like your telling about lighting ^^

fazenda
11-02-2008, 01:16 AM
is that supposed to be about jets dropping bombs?

shiro
11-02-2008, 01:26 AM
is that supposed to be about jets dropping bombs?


yeah your right..my bad.i think it was lighting at first

lemonek
11-02-2008, 02:52 AM
it is pretty good. to me is like a fantasy type poem.

LoKiWorlD
11-02-2008, 07:47 AM
maybee maybee im doing something more in depth with story and plot with conflicts

Interesting....the suspense is killing me. XD