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Waste
10-31-2008, 05:32 PM
I: Little Miss perfect.

She’s suffocating,
She’s loosing
Kiss her quick
She’s rotting away.

She needs you
She’s waiting
She’s crying
She needs to breath freely again

Little miss perfect can I…?
Little miss always right.
Little miss I don’t give a shit now
Little miss ‘done up too fucking tight.’

She’s suffocating,
She’s loosing
Kiss her quick
She’s rotting away.

Little miss put on a show.
Little miss keep it hidden
Little miss, please let go
You’re holding yourself way too tight.

Tears rolling down her cheeks, now
A secret that she’ll never tell, now
Her scars are on the inside
She’s bleeding on the inside

Little miss perfect can I…?
Little miss always right.
Little miss I don’t give a shit now
Little miss ‘done up too fucking tight.’

There’s blood around her lips now,
There’s too much shit for her now.
Little miss perfect is now
Trying to get away

Tears rolling down her cheeks
A secret that she’s written down
She is showing her true scars
The truth can be seen bleeding from her eyes.

Little miss perfect is out now.
She’s little miss ‘I don’t give a shit’
Her true colours shining through now.
Little miss is spiralling into an even bigger pit.

II: Little miss High
She’s high now
She smiles now
She needs to
come down now

In the morning
she feels like shit
In the evening she takes more
because of it.

She’s high now
She flies now
She’s soaring
She’s whoring

Her life is full of
Sex and drugs
Rock and roll
And sex and smoke
And alcohol.

She’s high now
She smiles now
She needs to
come down now

Little miss ‘don’t do that’
Little miss ‘be home by eight’
Little miss ‘listen to your mother’
Little miss will be dead soon if she carries on at this rate.

She knows this
Her secret
that's why she does it
Because it hurts everyone else as well.

But does she care?
She don’t fucking care.
Does anyone care?
Not anymore.

She’s taking them down with her
Along with the sex and
The drugs and
The alcohol.

Little miss ‘don’t do that’
Little miss ‘be home by eight’
Little miss ‘listen to your mother’
Little miss will be dead soon if she carries on at this rate.

III: Little miss.
Story of her life
Everyone goes up
She comes down
Way too far down

No more money,
Means no more drugs
No more friends
They’ve turned into thugs.

She didn’t want this.
She didn’t need the pain
Not then not now
She’s walking in the rain

It’s hiding the tears
They role down her cheeks
Hiding her secret.
She’s been screaming for weeks.

She’s suffocating
She’s loosing
Little miss perfect
Knows where it’s going

Kiss her quick
She’s going
She’s fading
She’s trying to get away

Unstable, she bleeds freely
Attempts to hide the sorrow
They find her on her bedroom floor
There is no tomorrow

Little miss perfect can I…?
Little miss always right.
Little miss I don’t give a shit now
Little miss ‘done up too fucking tight.’

badluckcat
10-31-2008, 05:39 PM
really good Waste :)..... i like them :D

LoKiWorlD
10-31-2008, 05:45 PM
Nicely Done...you have talent.

Break001
10-31-2008, 08:51 PM
Indeed y if i may ask are u closing off this talent for that matter?
But other then that its quite good. Keep it up or don't stop just like that unless u have other goals u need to achieve then gambate

BlueSano
10-31-2008, 10:01 PM
Indeed y if i may ask are u closing off this talent for that matter?
But other then that its quite good. Keep it up or don't stop just like that unless u have other goals u need to achieve then gambate

*nods* i agree with break ..don't make it your last attempt ... they are great i love them and i really related to the first one ...you know you can write girl ...just keep it coming ^_~

shiro
10-31-2008, 10:48 PM
the lyrics is good but i dont know the music.

jyuukai
10-31-2008, 11:36 PM
I'm a musician and I liked em so you got talent Waste ^^

...Mind if I use em??? just kidding... ::D:
...or am I???

AkiTorrien
11-05-2008, 02:25 AM
Thats a very good song! I like it :3

animechic
11-11-2008, 03:40 PM
super super awesome dude everyone i know would buy that song