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Waste
10-24-2008, 05:34 PM
Your death clock’s counting,
Five. Four. Three.
Simple minds fill mine with glee.

Down the alley and through the day,
Here comes sacrifice,
With a baby named prey.

Take my hand I’ll guide you well,
Through the light that blinds,
To the pits of hell.

Remember my name,
And take great heed,
As I remind you of your once great deed.

As ominous as a black feathered swan.
Your death clock’s counting
Three. Two. Gone.

LoKiWorlD
10-24-2008, 05:39 PM
It has a really nice rhythm...almost like a song.

Holly-Sama
10-24-2008, 07:48 PM
I liked it. You're a great writer.

badluckcat
10-24-2008, 07:52 PM
i love it :)...

Solinari
10-29-2008, 02:56 PM
Very god job waste! so far all of your stuff that i've read is excellent.