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10-21-2008, 01:42 AM
Death is an unheard symphony
People spouting blasphemy
Is this the end for me
A new beginning a new hope
A life after the rope.
This is the end of me.
The end of the free.
I was bored hehe its not very good.
10-21-2008, 01:51 AM
There's something odd about the rhyming scheme...But I like it, short and simple.
10-21-2008, 02:05 AM
Im not a real good writer I just write what comes to mind and try and scheme it up but this stemmed from the crucible because the main hero was hung for accusation of being a witch
10-21-2008, 08:16 AM
Yeah, there isn't a set rhyme scheme, this is free verse. I like it Jason, especially after you put it in that context it is very fitting.
10-21-2008, 03:05 PM
It's nice Jason. The rhyme scheme being free like it is makes it that much better. Death is a bit overplayed in poetry, but putting it into context from the crucible gives it perfect sense. nice job!
10-21-2008, 03:24 PM
Nice work. I like short poems. They usually have more emotion behind them.
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