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Inulove17
10-17-2008, 10:12 PM
Hey guys.. I just made this poem up yesterday.. I had a few really good lines laying around from thinking about them just randomly.. Tell me what you think!

I Belong

I bet you will never guess
What I need to express
I feel the need to let you know
That I never want to let you go
I belong with you
Like the stars that hang in the sky
Or the moon that passes by
I belong in those arms
Always there and never disregarded
Loved and always guarded
I belong to one and only one
Confident…perhaps
But I leave no gaps
I belong with the one I love
Sharing hugs and kisses
Only leaving when dismissed
I belong to you
Am I wrong to suggest
That I could possibly be blessed?

Anime_Dude
10-18-2008, 04:35 AM
Couldnt expect any less from u...and i bet i know who u were thinking of
when u wrote this:) lol

AkiTorrien
10-18-2008, 05:16 AM
Awwwwww!!!! That is such a sweet poem! I like it alot.

Inulove17
10-18-2008, 05:58 AM
Couldnt expect any less from u...and i bet i know who u were thinking of
when u wrote this:) lol

Oh you evil!! You read my mind.. yesh I was and it left him speechless!! Hee he.
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Aww thankies!!! I donno how it all came together but I switched it up and it pieced together!! :)

Anime_Dude
10-18-2008, 06:18 AM
Oh you evil!! You read my mind.. yesh I was and it left him speechless!! Hee he

yes indeed i am*grins*...i would have thought it would::D:

Inulove17
10-19-2008, 02:12 AM
Yeah.. I'm glad I could make him smile once again.. now i'm in the mood to write more.. my story is on hold and has been for the longest time. But poetry is intriguing me now.. I want to get better at it. :)

KiriJolith
10-22-2008, 02:06 PM
Very nice poem!!! I know whoever you wrote it for is probably feeling extremely special after hearing/reading it.

Holly-Sama
10-22-2008, 04:02 PM
Such a nice little heartwarming poem! Good job, Inu.

lemonek
10-23-2008, 07:58 PM
I bet ur in love. Nice poem