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AkiTorrien
10-14-2008, 05:50 AM
(This is a story I wrote back in febuary so It is kinda old right now. but I though I would post it because alot of people seem to like my writing)

Last night I had a happy dream!
I was sitting in my room, at my desk looking over some reports, also prepareing to take a few new recruites out on a training practice. When suddenly there was a knock on my door. I look over...:

"Come in?"

The door opened and there standing in front of me was the one who I love. He was standing there looking at me. I sighed and looked down. He looked into my eyes and I knew it, He was going to tell me to stop acting so childish, To act my age, and to tell me to leave him alone. My ears folded over as he walked towards me. I turned around and contined to look over my reports. Suddenly I felt someone's arms wrap around me. I looked up and saw him, he had his arms wrapped around me. I blushed...:

"What are you doing?"

He smiled and toke my hand and made me stand up, we looked into eachother's eyes and I couldnt help but blush. He contined to hold me closer to him and I smiled and rested up against him.

"I am sorry for not noticing it sooner"
"What do you mean..?"
"I know you like me..."

I looked down and blushed looking away thinking he was going to laught at me, suddenly I look at him and he is moving closer to my face. he bend over and placed a kiss on my cheek. I blushed and smiled, my tail wagging alittle.

"I do like you...I know you think its silly of me to like you, but I do...I love you.."
"I dont think of it as stupid, or silly...becuase....to be honest...I love you to..."

My eyes widened and then I looked up into his eyes, I blushed alittle and then smiled happily, I couldnt belivie it. he liked...Loved me back. I havent been this happy in ages. He contined to hold me close to him and I looked up into his eyes.

"Do you really love me back?"
"Of course I do...I love you."

I smiled again, happily then he smiled back. he moved closer to me and held me against his chest. I smiled and rested up against him wagging my tail. He moved his face closer to mine and then suddely he placed his lips against him, kissing me lightly. I blushed but then I kissed him back. He deepened the kiss, wrapping his arms around my waist. I deepend the kiss back and then cuddled close to him wagging my tail. He lightly pulled back from the kiss and looked into my eyes.

"I love you..."
"I love you too..."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Dream End ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

I then woke up and looked around, I sighed and looked around my room. I know My dream was not real, but I wish it was real, or maybe one day I wish for it to come alive.

Raven
10-14-2008, 06:04 AM
Wow, happy dreams like that always make me feel depressed... you are a good writer though!

AkiTorrien
10-17-2008, 04:25 AM
Thank you very much ^_^. I am glad you liked it. The dream was not a dream that I had, yet a dream one of my characters had about the guy she is in love with.

soulten
10-17-2008, 05:40 AM
I think I'm just goind to avoid this section, the amazing writing makes mine look like...crap.

AkiTorrien
10-18-2008, 05:18 AM
Nah, you dont have to avoid this area. I think you are a very good writer. ^^ but thank you all for the comments so far.

Inulove17
10-19-2008, 02:19 AM
Awww that is soooo sweet!! I love those dreams, that feel so real, it's depressing to wake up from them just to find out it wasn't real. But there's always hope. :)

AkiTorrien
10-20-2008, 05:55 AM
It is a dream my character had though but I understand what you mean!

lemonek
10-20-2008, 02:36 PM
I think I'm just goind to avoid this section, the amazing writing makes mine look like...crap.

LOL, i dont think so ur writing is nice i like it. And yes i definitely like this writing as well, good job.

spirit
10-20-2008, 03:25 PM
Wow, happy dreams like that always make me feel depressed... you are a good writer though!Seriously?? Happy dreams always make you feel depressed? So, why didn't you tell me that the last time I told you about my dream, hmm?

aezgaga
10-20-2008, 04:29 PM
Wow I love it :O nice writting ^^ I almost always forget my dream that make the impression so It's look like I never dream ^^' but it seem that is impossible to not dream so... lol Well thank Your story make me smile ^^


(i know it's not your dream lol)

Dolly
10-20-2008, 09:22 PM
That sounds like it must have been nice, thanks for sharing.

jamjfly
10-20-2008, 11:20 PM
That sounded a little like a dream I once had, just it was the other way around.

atomsk
10-20-2008, 11:52 PM
how do you peeps write like that XD
i cant get a single page of story down without sex, killing, general evil, profanity, or D)all of the above XD

yukichan87
10-21-2008, 12:10 AM
like the story...ur a very good writer and keep up the good work =]

AkiTorrien
10-21-2008, 01:57 AM
@_@ Omg thank you everyone!!

Tomboychic
10-21-2008, 02:33 AM
It kinda makes me feel depressed also
But it also gives me a happy feeling kind of
But your writing is totally awesome XD
I'm working on some writing but i'm not quite at your level yet XD :cute:

KiriJolith
10-22-2008, 02:44 PM
Very nice job Aki!!!! It's very very well written.

AkiTorrien
10-27-2008, 08:10 PM
Thank you everyone ^.^