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Axe Man
10-09-2008, 01:24 PM
So for those who like to write songs and what not I was wondering is there a song you really wish that you would have writin? I guess I'll go first.

Lifehouse: Whatever It Takes Lyrics

A strangled smile fell from your face
It kills me that I hurt you this way
The worst part is that I didn't even know
Now there's a million reasons for you to go
But if you can find a reason to stay

I'll do whatever it takes
To turn this around
I know what's at stake
I know that I've let you down
And if you give me a chance
Believe that I can change
I'll keep us together whatever it takes

She said "If we're gonna make this work
You gotta let me inside even though it hurts
Don't hide the broken parts that I need to see"
She said "Like it or not it's the way it's gotta be
You gotta love yourself if you can ever love me"

I'll do whatever it takes
To turn this around
I know what's at stake
I know that I've let you down
And if you give me a chance
And give me a break
I'll keep us together, I know you deserve much better

But remember the time I told you the way that I felt
That I'd be lost without you and never find myself
Let's hold onto each other above everything else
Start over, start over

I'll do whatever it takes
To turn this around
I know what's at stake
I know I've let you down
And if you give me a chance
and believe that I can change
I'll keep us together whatever it takes

carolyn07
10-09-2008, 01:32 PM
...hey axe,.another one,,.huh!?,.

wheres my lyrics you promised me?,.♥

Dolly
10-09-2008, 05:57 PM
If wish I wrote Viva la Vida, personally.

Holly-Sama
10-09-2008, 06:09 PM
All On Black - Alkaline Trio

I put it all on black, no color you're all dressed in
And a stab in the back left you bleeding on the floor
And I'm mourning the death, the recent passing of your insides
I smile in regret every time I think of how I spoke to you

I put it all in back of my mind where I hold you
I'm just trying to keep track how far back it really goes
And I'm living in lack of the blood sent from the heavens
I'm just trying to relax as the killer's waiting right outside my door

What's black and white?
What's read all over?
This tired book, this organ donor

Sweet blasphemy, my giving tree
It hasn't rained in years
I bring to you this sacrificial offering of virgin ears
Leave it to me, I remain free from all the comforts of home
And where that is, I'm pleased as piss to say, I'll never really know

I put them all in black, the four walls of my bedroom
And I trimmed them in red, peeled your picture off the wall
And I'm living in lack of the blood sent from your heartbeat
That arrived in your neck every time I salivated over you

What's upside down?
What's coated in silver?
This crucifix is my four leaf clover

Sweet blasphemy, my giving tree
It hasn't rained in years
I bring to you this sacrificial offering of virgin ears
Leave it to me, I remain free from all the comforts of home
And where that is, I'm pleased as piss to say, I'll never really know

One of these days, it's gonna catch up to you
Throwing looks like those around
One of these nights, I promise to you
I'll soon be sleeping sound
As soon as I leave town

Areku
10-09-2008, 06:26 PM
For those who saw my pyrotechnic text in the creative section, I wrote it before hearing that song, so when I did I was glad to see I wasn't the only one who liked fire.

Incinerate - Sonic Youth

I ripped your heart out from your chest
Replaced it with a grenade blast

Incinerate x4

The firefighters hose me down
I don't care, I'll burn out anyhow
It's four-alarm girl, nothing to see
Hear the sirens come for me

You doused my soul with gasoline
You flicked a match into my brain

Incinerate x4

The firefighters are so nice
I remember you so cold as ice
The flames are licking at your feet
The sirens come to put me me out of misery

You wave your torch into my eyes
Flamethrower lover burning mind

Incinerate x8

jyuukai
10-09-2008, 11:42 PM
wow lyrics I wish I wrote. Basically all of Secondhand Serenade's songs. That guy is my idol/role model

xXWENWENXx
10-10-2008, 04:25 AM
ppl r really gud wif writing those days
i personally ima not really gud at english
never really thought lyrics

lemonek
10-10-2008, 05:51 AM
To my Love:

I have found somebody who sees the pointlessness
and still keeps their purpose in mind
and who has a tortured soul
some of the time
The one who will either put out for me
or put me out of misery
or maybe just put it all to words
and make me say, you know
I never heard it put that way
make me say, what did you just say?
He can hold my interest
hold it and never let it fall
someone who can flatten me with a kiss
that hits like a fist
or a sentence, that stops me like a brick wall
because if you hear me talking
listen to what I'm not saying
if you hear me playing guitar
listen to what I'm not playing
and don't ask me to put words
to all the spaces between notes
in fact if you have to ask, forget it
do and you'll regret it
I'm tired of being the interesting one
I'm tired of having fun for two
just lay yourself on the line
and I might lay myself down by you
but don't sit behind your eyes
and wait for me to surprise you
I have found somebody who can make me
scream until it's funny
give me a run for my money
Someone who can
twist me up in knots
tell me, for the woman who has everything
what have you got?
I found someone who's not afraid of me
or anyone else
in other words I want someone
who's not afraid of himself.

Waste
10-10-2008, 05:56 AM
Oasis, wonderwall.

badluckcat
10-11-2008, 09:12 AM
I am the first
a shadow at the end
of the hallway
I spin the carousel
the laughter recedes away
my finger on your lips
i stole something precious

I am the second
alone in a faceless crowd
a human caught
in monochrome dreams
I scream to wake up
my voice drowns deep underground
only the dead can hear me,
see me

I am the third
a master
a sentinel of awakeness
I hold truth like a torch
shadows flicker before me
rapid eye follow the
chain of thought
until the silence ends