AkiTorrien
10-04-2008, 05:33 AM
Tis a bunch of poems I have written over the past while. I have been told I am a very god poet so I wanted to know what people think of them. Yes I know they seem so darkkkk and depressssiing but those are what My best poems come from, so enjoy!
Dont you Turn away
When they turn away
When their smiles fade
and they turn from you
Please dont feel blue
I will be here for you
Standing by you
Never looking away
When you need someone to stay
I will stand by you
Yes I promise you.
Do you really care?
I feel so hurt, yet you dont care. I try to smile, when no one cares,
when I cry, you look away, you dont have the time of day, you say you care but do you really do?
Each lie that is spoken, manes my life, it slowly eats me, and tears me up...inside
so go ahead and tell your lines, as much as it kills me inside, I will still try to smile..
Broken Promise
You promised me
That you would care
and comfort me
You promised me
That I would be okay
You said to me one lonealy night
"Dont cry for I am here."
yet here I stand
Tears on my hand
I remember the night you left
and torn me into two
the night I became the only thing
you wouldnt live for throught
So now I try to smile each day
and pretent that I dont care
but deep inside
this will haunt me till the day I die
Who Am I?
Who am I..?
I ask myself that becuase..
to the world I am nothing important
I am bout the shadow of my past that dwells over my future.
But I know who I am...
I am an angel whos wings have been clipped..
A bird whos wings are drenched in oil, unable to fly escaping the cruelties of life
A fallen Angel looking for its place
A tragic soul living a mastake
Living a lie
Living as a fake
why did I meet this fate
Help me please
before its to late
help me unseal my fate.
Am I still?
Am I Still WOnderful?
Am I still Kind hearted and careing?
Am I still good natured and not filled with negetivity?
Am I still the one you said I was?
You said it yourself
One year past today
and I try each day
to live up to
I may not be perfect
but answer me this
am I still like that?
Dont you Turn away
When they turn away
When their smiles fade
and they turn from you
Please dont feel blue
I will be here for you
Standing by you
Never looking away
When you need someone to stay
I will stand by you
Yes I promise you.
Do you really care?
I feel so hurt, yet you dont care. I try to smile, when no one cares,
when I cry, you look away, you dont have the time of day, you say you care but do you really do?
Each lie that is spoken, manes my life, it slowly eats me, and tears me up...inside
so go ahead and tell your lines, as much as it kills me inside, I will still try to smile..
Broken Promise
You promised me
That you would care
and comfort me
You promised me
That I would be okay
You said to me one lonealy night
"Dont cry for I am here."
yet here I stand
Tears on my hand
I remember the night you left
and torn me into two
the night I became the only thing
you wouldnt live for throught
So now I try to smile each day
and pretent that I dont care
but deep inside
this will haunt me till the day I die
Who Am I?
Who am I..?
I ask myself that becuase..
to the world I am nothing important
I am bout the shadow of my past that dwells over my future.
But I know who I am...
I am an angel whos wings have been clipped..
A bird whos wings are drenched in oil, unable to fly escaping the cruelties of life
A fallen Angel looking for its place
A tragic soul living a mastake
Living a lie
Living as a fake
why did I meet this fate
Help me please
before its to late
help me unseal my fate.
Am I still?
Am I Still WOnderful?
Am I still Kind hearted and careing?
Am I still good natured and not filled with negetivity?
Am I still the one you said I was?
You said it yourself
One year past today
and I try each day
to live up to
I may not be perfect
but answer me this
am I still like that?