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Axe Man
09-22-2008, 06:04 PM
here are some lyrics i wrote there not that great but comments are welcome.

Saw you yesterday.
I diden't know what to say.
I tryed to talk to you.
I guess my message diden't get on through.

Saw you yesterday
but your friends where in the way.
I tryed to talk to you.
but they woulden't let me through

Chorus
So what am i supposed to do?
when your doing this to me?
One minute I'm the king of the world.
the next I'm nothin better but the dirt on your feet.
end chorus
saw you yesterday.
What was i supposed to say?
when your blowen me away.
and don't even look the otherway.

saw you yesterday.
you decided to look at me.
I really wounder what you think.
do you really like tourchering me?

Chorus
So what am i supposed to do?
when your doing this to me?
One minute I'm the king of the world.
the next I'm nothin better but the dirt on your feet.

Saw you yesterday.
But you looked the otherway.
I wounder what's so wrong with me.
am I going agianst some prophecy?

Saw you yesterday.
you decided to talk to me.
but when your friends saw us in the mall.
you pretended not to know me at all.

Chorus
So what am i supposed to do?
when your doing this to me?
One minute I'm the king of the world.
the next I'm nothin better but the dirt on your feet.

lemonek
09-22-2008, 06:43 PM
Amazing. Im identify myself a lot with these lyrics.

listerlee
09-22-2008, 07:26 PM
woW nice lyric..i like it..^^

Axe Man
09-23-2008, 01:42 PM
thanx guys.

meraychan
09-23-2008, 03:18 PM
nice n awesome...^_^

KiriJolith
09-26-2008, 03:57 PM
Good job. They really identify with most people who would ever hear/read them. Keep it up!

Mr.Mystery
09-29-2008, 06:02 AM
Very nice. Keep writing. =]

DARKSYSTEM
09-29-2008, 08:35 AM
hey kool lyrics

salmeria
09-29-2008, 10:00 AM
really nice lyrics...^^

Axe Man
09-29-2008, 01:19 PM
thanx alot for the comments guys I might put up another song I wasen't expecting this much feedback.

bluedragon
09-29-2008, 01:40 PM
nice bro i like it a lot and that wat alwats happens to me.......keep it up ur great

zato
09-29-2008, 02:42 PM
Not to shabby .... like it !

carolyn07
09-29-2008, 02:45 PM
...hey axe!,.didnt know you write so nice!,.

nice one!,.

keep it up!,.♥

dog009
10-06-2008, 06:02 AM
really kool, I even try singing it. :)