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badluckcat
09-17-2008, 01:40 PM
it's already to late to turn back
you put your mask and walked this path
the past remains were it should remain
the future awaits
not you but a fake
your life has ended
a new one's began
but its the fake that takes over this one
you liked green
but she likes pink
you were a tomboy
she acts like a queen
she lives in you body
but it's not you anymore
you wished for change
and this is what you got
she locked you in the darkest place of her mind
from where you can't come back to life
you hate it now
that you lost yourself
when you look in the mirror
you don't even know what's there
but the mask it's to thick
you can't take it down
when you become like this
there's no way around
you can't be yourself anymore
once you let her take your life
you'll be the one left behind .

Orangeii
09-17-2008, 01:44 PM
hmm. interesting...

LoKiWorlD
09-17-2008, 01:48 PM
Pretty good starting to wonder what else you got...

meraychan
09-17-2008, 02:23 PM
its nice i can relate...i'm like dat sometimes...i reli love it...^_^

carolyn07
09-17-2008, 02:26 PM
...shockz!,.im like that sometimes!,.geesh!,.♥

lemonek
09-18-2008, 07:10 AM
wow, i really liked it. its so similar to me

Holly-Sama
09-18-2008, 09:26 PM
Wow. Very nice.

Kudos~

Nina-chan
09-19-2008, 05:48 AM
Nicely done. ^_^ I enjoyed reading that, you did a good job.

badluckcat
09-19-2008, 11:15 AM
thanks guys ^ ^ :):D

KiriJolith
09-19-2008, 02:47 PM
That was a very nicely done poem badluckcat. It not only kept the readers attention, it drew them in and held them to the very last word. Personally, I love it! very good job!

badluckcat
09-19-2008, 02:51 PM
thank you kirijolith :)...

GiGi22337
09-22-2008, 05:56 PM
Wow! Great Poem (^_^)... I can relate to it at some point... Please do keep it up ^^... I'd like to read more of your writing :)

badluckcat
09-22-2008, 05:59 PM
thank you :)..

Mr.Mystery
09-29-2008, 06:07 AM
Great job. Writing things that easily relate to others is a hard thing to do, but you managed to do it. =]

Keep it up.

zato
09-29-2008, 11:15 AM
Nice, u really poetic hey :)