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~nekochan~
09-17-2008, 03:29 AM
Silence for others...
Is much too quiet...
But for me....
Silence...
Is too loud...

I am enlightened by music
I turn it up loud
To drown out the volume
Of silence itself...

Others may think it's much too quiet...
Wrong choice of words...
It's much too loud...
In school it's unavoidable....
At home it's an annoyance...

But lonliness is torture and sancutary
Turn up the music if you have it
If you don't then....
You'll have to endure silence...

Silence....

Is much too loud...

Orangeii
09-17-2008, 03:32 AM
ooh i loved it!

SinXxX
09-17-2008, 03:33 AM
Aww, it caught my attention, and it was good. Good work.

LoKiWorlD
09-17-2008, 03:34 AM
Wow that was really good ^.^ JoB WeLL DoNe.

spingo
09-17-2008, 03:38 AM
it amazing :)

mszjay14
09-17-2008, 04:45 AM
that poem is good....and it's also true!!...silence is like torture!! i hate it!!...i think that's why i develope this thing 4 rock music....

lemonek
09-17-2008, 06:31 AM
I love silence

contrast
09-17-2008, 07:53 AM
Related: "Silence is Golden but Duct tape is Silver" my friend thought it up originally. and first. I got proof of the date. ect. any how this poem is really cool. love it, or leave its awsome!

AngelKit
09-17-2008, 09:26 AM
That's a good poem :)

bluedragon
09-17-2008, 10:55 AM
love that poem great :) silence is good

animex09
09-17-2008, 11:40 AM
ni~~~~~~ce. that was an interesting poem. im not all that into poetry but i enjoyed this one, good job.

meraychan
09-17-2008, 11:43 AM
a true experience n its nice...it reflects wat pipz r into ryt now...^_^

BlueSano
09-17-2008, 12:36 PM
love that poem ...and it's true ..very true

KiriJolith
09-17-2008, 02:34 PM
very nice poem! it draws the reader in, and keeps them intrested the entire time. Very very good job!