Anti3nigma
09-12-2008, 05:38 AM
Ok currently I am writing a story that I hope to publish into an anime because I myself believe its an over running topic and I just plain love it. Oh, here is the beginning, its just the background story of what will lead to the events. If you have any comments about the story PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me. Hope You Enjoy.
It was 1410 and a war had engulfed the far east with blood and tears. Involving many great warriors of the earth and their enemies from the the skies referred to as "The Fallen". It was said that The Fallen were angels that were thrown from the land of gods and sent to do a great task to be forgiven for their sins. However, only a few tried to accomplish the tasks while the others, stripped of their wings and a few powers, were floating through space lieing in wait.
After the incident in 1409 where it was told that a japanese emperor had amazing powers like those of a powerful, angel-like being, The Fallen had descended upon the earth. The lay in wait for almost one full year before their plan for assassinating the reported emperor. It was then that a secret organization working in japan named The Angel's Syndicate completely eradicated every attempt of The Fallens plans proceeding. At that time war broke out among The Fallen and the earth.
They had only been planning on killing just the emperor but instead decided to kill everyone on Earth then take earth as their home. It is now that people began to quake in fear at the even mentioning of the name of The Fallen. They had killed over thousands over a period of months and were growing more powerful from the souls of the dreadful. This did not please The Angel's Syndicate.
The world had begun to shake in fear when all hope was being washed away. Then, out of the blue, the 11 most renowned warriors from around the world had challenged The Fallen to a battle which would decide the fate of the world. The Fallen had chosen to agree to the battle and told the warriors they could bring as many men as they would like. It was to be held on a battlefield in Edo in approximately a month.
People began to build shelters and hide in mountains and caves. Everyone, but the army of warriors who were to fight, were fleeing to a safe place. The warriors from around the world had gathered on the land of Edo and marched for the battlefield, led by the 11 renowned warriors. The warriors were uneasy and they trained hard for the upcoming battle. Everything was as it was and as earth was preparing The Fallen had called for their most elite squad in the ranks, Squad 001 they were referred to as the Shinigami's.
All pieces were in place and squad 001 descended to earth for the final battle that would decide the fate of humanity. The terms of the battle agreement was simply put, if earth wins than The Fallen must retreat for al eternity, BUT if The Fallen should win, then the existance of humans would be no more.
The battlefield was at a stand-still. Here on this battleground stood the 8 fallen of squad 001, opposing the roughly estimated 1,900,000 troops that stood before them with great terror in many of their eyes. The Fallens eyes were filled with nothing but the sense of loss. Truly it was a traumatizing moment where everything fell quiet. The Higurashi had fallen silent, the late howling of the wolves were nothing but lost, everything was silent as if is had been frozen in place for an eternity and will stay there as always.
The only thing these warriors of space and earth looked over was the most crucial, How would they start the battle? As the thought rushed through their heads they seemed somewhat flustered but regained initial thought after realizing that when it was needed, the time would come when the battle began. And so it did, as the first snowflake of winter had floated from the sky and gently landed on earth it began. Loud screams of pain and torture were coming from the troops as they were killed off by the thousand.
It took only a short hour for the fallen to wipe out 2/3's of the troops and completely unharmed at that. The renowned 11 warriors were almost gone with only 3 left to control the troops. The 3 had gathered and told the troops to spread out in all directions. They begun to plot an idea that would take many minutes and flawless motions to make it even if only slightly possible.
Within minutes their target had been spotted beheading hundreds of troops and were heading in the opposite direction of the trap. 1 of the 3 renowned had decided to act upon instinct and led the target to the trap by running as fast as he could through trees and brush. He had finally stopped on top of the trap and the woman fallen had landed behind him. She stepped forward into the trap and grabbed the warrior by the neck.
At that moment the 2 other warriors thrust their enchanted weapons deep inside her stomach and heart with great force. Everything stopped as she let out an ear splitting scream, it wasn't a scream of pain but a scream of hate.
Sorry im gonna finish here for tonight. Let me get your comments of what has happened so far and please feel free to reword or rewrite whatever but please do re-quote so I know what you are talking about ^.^ thanks for the help.
It was 1410 and a war had engulfed the far east with blood and tears. Involving many great warriors of the earth and their enemies from the the skies referred to as "The Fallen". It was said that The Fallen were angels that were thrown from the land of gods and sent to do a great task to be forgiven for their sins. However, only a few tried to accomplish the tasks while the others, stripped of their wings and a few powers, were floating through space lieing in wait.
After the incident in 1409 where it was told that a japanese emperor had amazing powers like those of a powerful, angel-like being, The Fallen had descended upon the earth. The lay in wait for almost one full year before their plan for assassinating the reported emperor. It was then that a secret organization working in japan named The Angel's Syndicate completely eradicated every attempt of The Fallens plans proceeding. At that time war broke out among The Fallen and the earth.
They had only been planning on killing just the emperor but instead decided to kill everyone on Earth then take earth as their home. It is now that people began to quake in fear at the even mentioning of the name of The Fallen. They had killed over thousands over a period of months and were growing more powerful from the souls of the dreadful. This did not please The Angel's Syndicate.
The world had begun to shake in fear when all hope was being washed away. Then, out of the blue, the 11 most renowned warriors from around the world had challenged The Fallen to a battle which would decide the fate of the world. The Fallen had chosen to agree to the battle and told the warriors they could bring as many men as they would like. It was to be held on a battlefield in Edo in approximately a month.
People began to build shelters and hide in mountains and caves. Everyone, but the army of warriors who were to fight, were fleeing to a safe place. The warriors from around the world had gathered on the land of Edo and marched for the battlefield, led by the 11 renowned warriors. The warriors were uneasy and they trained hard for the upcoming battle. Everything was as it was and as earth was preparing The Fallen had called for their most elite squad in the ranks, Squad 001 they were referred to as the Shinigami's.
All pieces were in place and squad 001 descended to earth for the final battle that would decide the fate of humanity. The terms of the battle agreement was simply put, if earth wins than The Fallen must retreat for al eternity, BUT if The Fallen should win, then the existance of humans would be no more.
The battlefield was at a stand-still. Here on this battleground stood the 8 fallen of squad 001, opposing the roughly estimated 1,900,000 troops that stood before them with great terror in many of their eyes. The Fallens eyes were filled with nothing but the sense of loss. Truly it was a traumatizing moment where everything fell quiet. The Higurashi had fallen silent, the late howling of the wolves were nothing but lost, everything was silent as if is had been frozen in place for an eternity and will stay there as always.
The only thing these warriors of space and earth looked over was the most crucial, How would they start the battle? As the thought rushed through their heads they seemed somewhat flustered but regained initial thought after realizing that when it was needed, the time would come when the battle began. And so it did, as the first snowflake of winter had floated from the sky and gently landed on earth it began. Loud screams of pain and torture were coming from the troops as they were killed off by the thousand.
It took only a short hour for the fallen to wipe out 2/3's of the troops and completely unharmed at that. The renowned 11 warriors were almost gone with only 3 left to control the troops. The 3 had gathered and told the troops to spread out in all directions. They begun to plot an idea that would take many minutes and flawless motions to make it even if only slightly possible.
Within minutes their target had been spotted beheading hundreds of troops and were heading in the opposite direction of the trap. 1 of the 3 renowned had decided to act upon instinct and led the target to the trap by running as fast as he could through trees and brush. He had finally stopped on top of the trap and the woman fallen had landed behind him. She stepped forward into the trap and grabbed the warrior by the neck.
At that moment the 2 other warriors thrust their enchanted weapons deep inside her stomach and heart with great force. Everything stopped as she let out an ear splitting scream, it wasn't a scream of pain but a scream of hate.
Sorry im gonna finish here for tonight. Let me get your comments of what has happened so far and please feel free to reword or rewrite whatever but please do re-quote so I know what you are talking about ^.^ thanks for the help.