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Waste
09-07-2008, 08:27 PM
I remember a time where we…
Remember a time when we sat alone,
Reminiscing about the past we had,
Our sins, we must, atone.

Remember the blood we spilt together?
The time’s we sat alone,
Nothing could tear us from our sides
Our sins, we could, atone.

Since when did you care about the deaths we caused?
The time’s we sat alone.
I’m here for you, I’ll protect you.
Our sins, no need to, atone.

I will always love you.
You said.
I’ll never forget
Your screams.
At night when we were all alone,
Your mind ripped at the seams.

I never thought that what we did
Would screw you up so much,
I’ll be with you forever
Even when you see the shadows
Coming for you, waiting for you,
This is how much I love you.
I’ll protect you from you.

I love you.

Together we run,
Together we’ll always fall,
But you’re falling alone
Your sins, you know, they call.

I walk through the doorway,
Find you sitting in the hall,
A note by your side,
You’re not breathing at all.

Did it get too much for you?
Or did the shadows slit your throat?
Could it have hurt like I do?
Our sins, they read like, your note.

I will always love you,
You said that once upon a time
Can you still love me where you are?
Our sins, you paid, the fine.

Orangeii
09-07-2008, 08:29 PM
thats cool i liked it!

mszjay14
09-08-2008, 02:45 AM
yea it was....i kinda enjoy poems like these =D

Stray_Pube
09-09-2008, 11:22 AM
Hmm, this really touched me.

It reminds me of my last relationship...

bluedragon
09-09-2008, 11:32 AM
awsome poem. love poem it got to me. :)

Waste
09-09-2008, 10:03 PM
Hmm, this really touched me.

It reminds me of my last relationship...

You and your partner murdered people?

BlueSano
09-09-2008, 11:25 PM
lovely T_T though kinda sad ...but i love it ..it's really well written :D as expected from you waste ...you never seas to amaze ^^

Stray_Pube
09-09-2008, 11:38 PM
You and your partner murdered people?

lol, no. Its complicated... to me, theres a deeper meaning in this poem that I guess only I can see. Ah well