My scanner sucks

[SinXxX]

http://www.animefuel.com/forum/album.php?albumid=706

These are some drawings I worked on in the last few weeks. Well, my cousins said that "we" should submit them to an online contest, but it gotten late. I just did the sketches, the colouring - not by me (so there's no colour). However, it would give me some relief if someone do some comments about proportions and stuffs. It would help me. These are also my first time drawing females without looking at some pics. I need some criticism.

[Viesta]

those are amazing. i think they look perfect ^^

[Chloe Saku]

That, is so awesome, I'm jealous. :D

[SinXxX]

Thanks for the compliments, Viesta and Chloe Saku ^^

[spirit]

http://www.animefuel.com/forum/album.php?albumid=706

These are some drawings I worked on in the last few weeks. Well, my cousins said that "we" should submit them to an online contest, but it gotten late. I just did the sketches, the colouring - not by me (so there's no colour). However, it would give me some relief if someone do some comments about proportions and stuffs. It would help me. These are also my first time drawing females without looking at some pics. I need some criticism.Ohhhh! I had no idea you had such a talent! You've never told me! :D I think those are pretty good. But I would love to give you a more detailed "criticism" sometime. Maybe tomorrow? I just came back from NYC, and I feel worn-out :/

[Bee_Chan]

:U Wow.
Well done I must say!
^__^

[Magicbird]

They look so... cute.
I really like the third one. Seems to stick out to me

[SinXxX]

@spirit: Thanks. It would much help me if you do that ^^

@Bee-Chan: Thanks

@Magicbird: The third one, I liked that one too. I just hate it, though, when the scanning killed some of its shading (like the first one). Thanks for the look^^

[spirit]

How long have you been drawing?
First of all, I like your pictures, because of so many details. Seems like you pay a lot of attention to the little things. And even though your drawings don't look "clean" but those strokes represents a "web of thoughts." I don't know if you understand. However, this is how professional artists draw and make sketches. They never make "clean" drawings - there is always a lot of strokes, it is supposed to be this "messy." Then when you are sure of how the picture is supposed to look, then you erase those unnecessary lines.
The 4th picture - I like his hands, neatly done :)
Females- you have a good sense of female body, they really do look feminine. Don't be afraid to draw breasts, hips or thighs xD hehe

[SinXxX]

I have been drawing since....6? I think my uncle's drawings inspired me, along with his attention to details (He's an engineer/architect - Yes, at the same time). The only difference though is that he was not messy. He often criticize me for being "Erasure-eater." Also, I think I understand those web of thoughts you're saying. The last drawing, I was thinking of her right hand reaching out, but I put it down with another knife instead. Got so many erasures from that one.
About the girls, I was too careful drawing the breast, the hips and the thighs...

Thanks for your input.

[KiriJolith]

Dude, those drawings are amazing!!!! I wish I could draw like that :(. Keep up the good work man, those are really really good!