one of my newest poems i don't have a title for it rite now though

[runt32a]

Night after night, day after day
I watch as things pass me on by
As the drama comes and goes
As things and others seem to
Change before my eyes

I watch as the little taste of
True freedom seems to slip
Out of my reach
Feeling like a little bit more
Of me is slipping, fading away
From me everyday, every night
Every hour, every minute
Even every second of my life
That ticks on by

As I lay here at night
Staring out into the deep
Dark sky, I ask myself
Why do I do the things I do
Why do I love the thngs I love
Why do I think the things I think
Why do I live the way I live
Why do I live at all

What is my purpose of being
In this world today
What do I want more
To live or to die
To love or to hate
To kill or to save

So til the day I figure out
Or the day I die
Depending on which comes first
I shall be watching as things me on by
As the drama comes and goes
As things and others seem to
Change before my eyes

I watch as the little taste of
True freedom seems to slip
Out of my reach
Feeling like a little bit more
Of me is slipping, fading away from me

And lay here at night
Staring out into the deep
Dark sky, I ask myself
Why do I do the things I do
Why do I love the thngs I love
Why do I think the things I think
Why do I live the way I live
Why do I live at all

What is my purpose of being
In this world today
What do I want more
To live or to die
To love or to hate
To kill or to save

[AngelKit]

Thats very good I like it :)

[Waste]

Ah thats dead good.

[Anime_Dude]

:o.o: thats deep...its really good,i liked it

[runt32a]

ty i like to write deep poems like that n 'Forever' n also some kinda deep but inspirational songs

[AngelKit]

ty i like to write deep poems like that n 'Forever' n also some kinda deep but inspirational songs

I write whatever is on my mind and write it down before it leaves my head:dead:

[runt32a]

yes i can understand that if i get an idea on how to start one i mite write it doen before i forget it but if its like wut its going to be bout i'll remember it later when i have the chance to start workin on it lol but i understand wut you mean

[AngelKit]

yes i can understand that if i get an idea on how to start one i mite write it doen before i forget it but if its like wut its going to be bout i'll remember it later when i have the chance to start workin on it lol but i understand wut you mean

Yeah I will share one my poetry on here soon as well but I need to think which one I should and should not

[runt32a]

which ever ones you feel comfortable about sharing on here to me none of mine are too personal that i post on here or other sites in a way 'forever' is a bit personal as that other poem i posted but not to much where i wouldn't feel comfortable bout posting em