jamjfly
07-31-2008, 03:51 PM
Hey all, tell me what you think. It is the prologue to the book I'm writing.
She ran as fast as she could, but it wasn’t fast enough. He was slowly gaining on her. She knew she would fall prey to him. All she had left in her arsenal of defense was to stand her ground, so she turned to face her pursuer. When she did, he wasn’t there. She was safe from harm, for now.
She returned home to get ready to go home, but she still had that feeling that she was being watched. Being cautious of the situation, she made sure no one was in the house and that everything was locked, and all the windows were shut tightly.
As she slept, he crept into the house, and into her room. He touched nothing, disturbed nothing from its resting place, but just watched. He then left, leaving only a note behind him. He smiled and snickered to himself as he said softly to himself, “you will soon be mine. You cannot stop the flow of your destiny.”
The next day, as she is about to leave her house, she sees the note……
She ran as fast as she could, but it wasn’t fast enough. He was slowly gaining on her. She knew she would fall prey to him. All she had left in her arsenal of defense was to stand her ground, so she turned to face her pursuer. When she did, he wasn’t there. She was safe from harm, for now.
She returned home to get ready to go home, but she still had that feeling that she was being watched. Being cautious of the situation, she made sure no one was in the house and that everything was locked, and all the windows were shut tightly.
As she slept, he crept into the house, and into her room. He touched nothing, disturbed nothing from its resting place, but just watched. He then left, leaving only a note behind him. He smiled and snickered to himself as he said softly to himself, “you will soon be mine. You cannot stop the flow of your destiny.”
The next day, as she is about to leave her house, she sees the note……