its gonna be a manga

[sparkrose]

no name yet please offer suggestions after i put up the third part
ummm i hope this speaks for itself its the plot im working on for a manga it starts here and now in the good old usa of summer 2008. theres this boy whos is striving to have a life like an anime. please tell me what you think.

setting:room
watching anime on computer

*sound of washing machine in background*
Main: "naru~chan kawaii de i wish i was that lucky bastard dam him!!!"
Mom:*from afar* dinner time!!!!
Main: kay! * runs over*

setting: at the dinner table

Dad: your moms picking tommorow at 5
Main: yungh
Mom: you know you should eat more greens
Main: *eats one string bean* *throws out food and paper plate**starts walking to room*
Dad: wait
Main: *stops and faces him* eh?
Dad: didnt you and your friends plan anything for summer?
Main: well anime Expo is over and i dont think any of us have the will to plan anything past a month.....
Dad *disapointed* all right you can go now but dont stay on the computer to long its bad for your eyes.
Main: kay

*goes back to room and watches anime late into the night*
*stops suddenly*
*goes to bed*
*notices that its getting brighter*

Main: ahh its the sun rise

*watches sunrise*

Main: i wish i could live in japan

[Unknown]

"A typical life of a weeaboo"
Thats my suggestion or just "Weeaboo"
Thats how the story is sounding to me.

Word of advice- either make it in all English or Japanese.
Do not add kawaii, baka, desu, onii-chan, onee-chan etc.
When the dialogue is in English.

[sparkrose]

"A typical life of a weeaboo"
Thats my suggestion or just "Weeaboo"
Thats how the story is sounding to me.

Word of advice- either make it in all English or Japanese.
Do not add kawaii, baka, desu, onii-chan, onee-chan etc.
When the dialogue is in English.

he actually says those words hes actually meshing together a whole bunch of languages into his own theres a reason for this which will be there soon

[sparkrose]

Main: i have a wierd train of thought.... oh well! *goes to sleep*

1 hour later

Main: the sun so hot i want a cute classmate to wake me up in the morning *falls back asleep*

lunch time

Main: *still alseep*

a bit later

Main: *wakes up*that was a good sleep
im hungry....*moves* im to hungry to move....
food~~~~~ *sleeps again*

10 minutes later

Main: milk milk i love milk *goes to get milk*
Mom: your moms here to pick you up!
Main: *hugs mom* bye
*walks over to car*
Main: *hugs mom* hi mommy i missed you
Mom): me to

*drives to other house*

Main: anyone over?
Mom): yea everyones swimming
Main: cool *changes*
Main: oi! *jumps into the pool*

swimming swimming swimming
Main: *gets out*

*goes straight to computer*

another anime all nighter
Mains thoughts while watching:
hahahahaha
***-chan!! i want to be there
DE-KEY-DA, dekeka, dekeda?, dekeda!
i should learn how to read japanese first...
oh well i know at least one symbol
click paste save
i finished the series already
time for bed
whats this a season 2
hahahahahahahahaha
i wish my life was like that
hahaha
if i went to japan it might happen

7 o'clock

Main: oh look another sunset
*gets up to watch*
Main: if only i had a cool robe that flows in the wind
i could stand out there looking all cool
*notices someone doing just that*
............
........................
.................................
!!!!

*house blows up*

[illuma]

This is kinda weird, but i'm thinking its ok so far. I don't really mind the mix of language since it don't really matter.

[Unknown]

^Only a weeaboo would say that.

he actually says those words hes actually meshing together a whole bunch of languages into his own theres a reason for this which will be there soon

Ok, looking forward to it.

　　　

[Rincewind]

Sounds interesting :D , might we get a longer preview :O?

[Mugen]

Have you got names for your characters? Pretty cool so far. ::D:

[moffetto]

interesting looking forward to the rest

[moffetto]

haha i just did that its just after sun rise

[sparkrose]

Have you got names for your characters? Pretty cool so far. ::D:

sorry almost all the characters have died
speaking of which i need a name for the main
that sounds like hes in the witness protection program
except it has to sound japanese
i will now explain the story:
(insert name here) is a boy who has been obsessed with anime for most of his life. when he was young his parents parted and both remarried. (i actually based that part on me) the person whom his mom remarried is a (something something those guys who buy and sell stuff). as a result (insert name here)'s family has been killed with him as the only surviver. and all debts have been passed down to him. a global protection agency heard of his story has taken (insert name here) and sent him to Japan. his name has been changed to (insert new japanese sounding name here) and he is now chasing his dream to have a life just like an anime. but there are alot of people getting in his way including the yakuza, mafia, aliens, and other various sorts of debt collectors. will he ever be able to achive his happiness? we can only watch and laugh at this poor excuse for a human.

and thats what im going for

[moffetto]

story sounds good

[Magicbird]

It sounds really interesting. Cant wait to see the drawings of it!! =]

[monsoon 10]

^Only a weeaboo would say that.
　　　

A weeabo on an anime website, gods preserve us.

[sparkrose]

whats a weeaboo?

[monsoon 10]

whats a weeaboo?

It's where babies come from./sarcasm

[Magicbird]

I heard a weeaboo means youre a good baseball player...

[sparkrose]

well my dad is a manager for a baseball manufacturing company.......

*edit
i should also add he works as head of the technical staff so he stares at a screen almost as long as me

also..
I NEED CHARACTER NAMES PEOPLEZ
HELPS PLZ

names i was going for:
before tradegy
Ren
Ken(listening to barbies such a **** song)
Josh
Ceasar
Adam
Pinky(thats a nick name)
Wy Yui Fartang (sheer bordem)


Remember last name first

Name after tradegy:
Akane, Kokoro (actually thats i girls name im usin it now)
meaning: deep red heart

Daichi, Asoko(i had to do this one)
meaning: big ahem*man place

Ichirou, Ai(awwwWwww)
meaning: first love

wazawai, yaku(i feel bad)
meaning: ummm seriously bad luck

[chitobi]

click this link it gives you names of girls and boys
here
http://japanese.about.com/library/weekly/aa072303a.htm

[suune]

Sunrise XD! You can try!

[tripletres]

this sounds really interesting. umm, i would like to no, how old is the main character? and, you dont have to use this if you dont want to, the name i would go with is Stephen. it sounds like a nerdish name of someone who's kinda been picked on in his life, and always wanted to go on an adventure. but then again, i dont know about the main. im visioning him as a nerdish teen... or am i wrong. describe him, please.

[sparkrose]

the main character is about 15
he has regular looks and
because he is obessed with anime
hes very kind and helps others whenever he can
although hes very smart he overthinks most of the time
so he ends up being prepared in for one part
and forgets about everything else

basically im trying to make him believable more believable as a person
because people dont like shallow characters (right?)

his hair is long enough so that when its spiked
its great for cosplaying (but he never has)
since he's very lazy he keeps his hair down
he also has a slight build of a non professional swimmer
ummmmmm
he favors leg work over hand work
but fights with his fist

thats about all i can say
id rather the charater devolps himself
so things might change
(no he does not wear glasses)