the rabbit hole

[sapphireAT]

falling down a rabbit hole
i gaze upon the bottom
my god, his spirit and his soul
guides me down the rabbit hole

wind brushing past me
as my eyes widen with fright
sharp, shinny brass spikes lay with curiosity
as i fall to my death in a crimson bloody sea

blood drips to the grassy plains below
as i stare up into the small opening above
my dress torn, stained and my heart filled with sorrow
as i decease to the world that i now know
:fruit:

[the murder]

..hmm....sounds like, mabey.....she was running from her problems falling ever deeper in to this hole until one day those problems overwhelmed her.....cool..very tragic, i like the way you write

[strike7785]

Not Bad sapp keep it up