Sleeping Beauty

[Ariya]

This is an older poem. I was cleaning up my room and I found one of my notebooks from school and started flipping through it and found this. I wrote it during French Class when we were watching Sleeping Beauty. Enjoy :3
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Pale face upturned,
white with powder--
dusty as if never touched.
Lost in a sea of black hair:
the moon in a lonely sky.
Unaware of all the failed attempts,
bright stars snatched from the sky.
Entombed within the tower.
Enclosed within her sleep.
And how much longer
till the brightest star burns
through the darkness of her fate?
Till the gentlest action,
the sweetest passion,
destroys the curse belain by hate?

[illuma]

Now this work right here is another good piece of art. The way you write is truly wonderful. This isn't one of your best, but it still is good. You keep improving and i know all of us here in animefuel will keep reading.

[Uminelle]

prettyful =]

[Ariya]

Thanks Umi!

Thank you, Illuma. I always do enjoy your comments. :3

[RzXzB]

Nice very nice if you find anymore post it thanks

[nena-X3]

that's a nice poem!! ^^

[strike7785]

thats a very peaceful peom

[Ariya]

Thank you everyone ^^

[Jack]

Righteous depiction of the tale. Beautifully written. You're right on.

-Jack

[jamjfly]

I am awestruck at how good you are at writing poems. Brava, Brava!!!! Please keep posting them.