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Lady Earth
06-10-2008, 10:59 PM
FYI Cleawen means Snow White in this old language I can't remember. In this poem I am taking in the beauty of a moth that many don't see. Hope you like.
*~*~*~*~*
Caressing the breeze
Enchanting all who dare set
Their eyes upon silvery tresses
Sparkles of illusions encompassed
By gloomy shadows of barren foliage

Snow enclosed terra firma
As she hastily flutters
To seek refuge from the tempest

Full moon's fluorescent radiance
Consents to the rhapsody
Of the hues emanating from her
Plated amorous glance

Destination attained
The Cleawen Moth
Slumbers concealed
To mankind

That's the way
The snow-white moth
Breathes her last
Seconds of existence

jamjfly
06-10-2008, 11:03 PM
That was a great poem too.

Lady Earth
06-10-2008, 11:06 PM
Thank you. Posting another-is not a poem is more like a story but in a journal type of way.

Lady Earth
06-21-2008, 10:06 PM
Ok...lol glad you like it\\(*____*)//bamboo flooring (http://www.bambwood.com/)

Ryuuzaki
06-21-2008, 10:10 PM
Ok...lol glad you like it

I hope your being sarcastic...Not saying it was bad (I enjoyed it).

Lady Earth
06-21-2008, 10:36 PM
No I am not being sarcastic at all...glad you enjoyed it.I hope your being sarcastic...Not saying it was bad (I enjoyed it).

Ryuuzaki
06-21-2008, 10:37 PM
No I am not being sarcastic at all...glad you enjoyed it.

He's just advertising for some company website -_-;; I doubt he even read it.

Lady Earth
06-21-2008, 10:46 PM
ok now that's sad....but well..shouldn't someone do something about that guy?He's just advertising for some company website -_-;; I doubt he even read it.

Ryuuzaki
06-21-2008, 10:50 PM
ok now that's sad....but well..shouldn't someone do something about that guy?

Eh yeah, I'll tell the staff soon if they don't sees it.

Lady Earth
06-21-2008, 10:53 PM
Yeah I hope this gets dealt with...its not funny to just post something like that....

RzXzB
06-22-2008, 01:48 AM
Nice Poem keep up the good work Lady Earth

Lady Earth
06-22-2008, 06:16 AM
Why thank you Rz!!!Nice Poem keep up the good work Lady Earth