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Liek_Rawrz
05-21-2008, 02:24 AM
Ok, so here you get to post your poetry for people to see, and maybe comment on. So feel free to do whatever.

Here is a poem of my own ::D::

Title: Twisting Tables

Running,
Breathing hard,

It's nearly impossible to escape...
They glide,
We trample,
So half heartedly,
Too undecidedly.

Us, by each other,
Them all together,
Can we fight through,
What may seem like a meteor shower?

They glare,
We stare,
What's so wrong,
With being stong?

They chased,
We ran,
They yelled,
We flinched.

So over powering,
So full of tyranny.

As we jump,
They stare,
We triumph,
They retreat.

Although it may seem gone,
The war is still raging,
They just don't know it,
We can see it.

They search,
We hide,
They look,
We sense.

It's all coming back,
Nothing can stop it...

He is here,
We are there,
Everywhere to be seen,
Nowhere to be found.

He hunts,
We prey,
He eats,
We drink.

So half-heartedly
Too undecidedly,
Why too much?
Why so little?

They sit and watch,
He glowers,
Everywhere to be found,
Nowhere to be seen.

Us, so strong,
Him, so furious,
Them, too afraid.


He is wrath,
We are fugitives.

Just another wild goose chase,
Of cat and mouse,
Cop and robber.

Only the places are switched,
Cat and cop are them,
Mouse and robber... are us.

As if it makes,
Any sense at all,
That we are the drinkers,
They are the eaters.

Corpses are their breakfast,
Animals are their lunch,
While our people--
Their full-course dinner.

They wait,
He goes,
We stay...

Everywhere to be seen,
So half-heartedly,
Nowhere to be found,
Too undecidedly...

They sleep,
He doesn't,
We're silent,
They're not.

We creep,
They crouch,
He crawls.

Everywhere to be found,
So undecidedly,
Nowhere to be seen,
Too half-heartedely.

It runs through their veins,
It stalls in our mouths.
So tasty,
Too irrisistable.

How can we stop,
On our rampage of love,
To feed on those,
Of injustice?

Because,

We are here,

He is there...

Everywhere to be undecided,
So to be seen,
Nowhere to be half-hearted,
Too careless to be found.

This is our territory,
Here is where we rule,
For you to leave this world.

Everywhere to be half-hearted,
So to be found,
Nowhere to be undecided,
Too much to see.

Our Gain.

Your Loss...



By: Lyndsay (a.k.a. Liek_Rawrz):ramen:

Ryuuzaki
05-21-2008, 02:47 AM
Oo, very very nice I really enjoyed it. Great job on that Rawrz! ^^

Liek_Rawrz
05-21-2008, 04:57 AM
thank you ^.^

zplk
05-22-2008, 09:55 AM
i got one no title yet:

Always think that it will get better, but never fully understanding the truth. You say one thing, but your actions never fully match. Confused, confounded, bitter, and cold. Sweet, truthful, and loving. Never knowing what side you gonna show, nobody knows. Scared, lost, and bewildered. Not knowing your next step, or where you’re going. To afraid to go after the things you want, hiding from pain. To timid, don’t want to be slain by the emotions that you feel. You state you’re strong, but you still have the fear of failure so you do nothing, but rot away , and decay. This is me! I don’t know how to react because I can’t take back my past. It all happened to fast. I’ve grown to be consumed by the retribution for my actions, but always sliding back to my former self because it is to easy to dismiss my emotions, always running and never fighting for what I want or believe. This is a weakness of humans, but I must rise above this because I will no longer stay weak

archangle
05-22-2008, 05:41 PM
awsome it was very good

Liek_Rawrz
05-22-2008, 11:06 PM
Thank you ^-^:kawaii: you guys are so nice =]:happy:

monsoon 10
05-23-2008, 02:31 AM
There once was a man from Peru...
That dreamed that he was eating his shoe...
He woke up at night in it a terrible fright..
To find that his wife was you.

tripletres
05-29-2008, 10:59 PM
hehe... love it monsoon.

here's mine. i thought of it when writing a love note.

When you didn't think anyone was around, I was there, hoping to catch a smile from your lips, or a glimpse my way, just so that my life is complete.

Koopaking
05-29-2008, 11:02 PM
There once was a hooker from Cancun
And we went into a hotel room
But we stayed up all night
Having a terrible fight
Over who would what and to whom

monsoon 10
05-29-2008, 11:08 PM
hehe... love it monsoon.

here's mine. i thought of it when writing a love note.

When you didn't think anyone was around, I was there, hoping to catch a smile from your lips, or a glimpse my way, just so that my life is complete.

You're not helping your case man...

tripletres
05-29-2008, 11:12 PM
you can shutup monsoon.

monsoon 10
05-29-2008, 11:14 PM
I think, I will for now.

Raven
05-30-2008, 03:30 AM
Good job guys, I enjoyed reading your poems :)

Here's one I spawned the other day:

Memory

I nearly forgot
That there has been a cost
For everything I do
And everything I’ve done.

A price that has been paid
A debt that is to come
Are paid by all the others
On whose path I run.

There will come a day
When I will play my part
Then worn and bent of age
I’ll run out of brick to lay.

I may be forgotten
My contribution small
But I will not forget
Those who came before.

Break001
05-30-2008, 07:22 AM
By someone i know not me =P

Rain

Walking in the rain
I see clearly now
You were never meant for me
Walking in the rain
The night stretches on
And the times we had fade into a memory
Tonight I'll sleep and dream
Of life without you
And I know
I know that no matter the weather
I'll still be here
I'll be here waiting
Waiting for the time when I realize
That I'm better off without you

Because every time I stop to think
I see the smile you slant my way
And every time I take a step
Your words echo into the silence

Walking in the rain
The puddles reflect my paper heart
Walking in the rain
I see I'm stronger than I thought
And the moments pass so slowly that
You can watch the rain fall down my face
But you'll never see the tears

Because every time I stop to think
I see the lies that smiles hide
And every time I take a step
Your words fade so meaningless

Walking in the rain
I'll never be the same again
Because I know that I am a better person
Than you are today
And I hope that you can find your way
Through the rain

Liek_Rawrz
06-07-2008, 07:04 PM
wow, these are pretty good (and interesting)

Liek_Rawrz
06-11-2008, 05:31 AM
Ok peopl, I have another poem and,uhm, here it is I guess...


Locked and Loded:


I bleed out my sorrows,
Like there's no tomorrow.
My heart, stopping every time,
No notes to start a rhyme.

Why spend so much time in the dark?
When you can rip the tree's bark?
Listen to the song of the little chick,
Trying not to get a bit sick.

Sad memories fill my head.
Looking at the bodies of the unliving dead.
Laying in my bed, digging for tears,
Nothing coming out, leaving me immune to my fears.

Don't try to be like me
Wasting your time through the dissected flea.
Don't resent me
Feeling empty, over the un-crossed sea.

There's little difference, between the living un-dead,
And the famous unliving dead.
Come to cry your lies
Seeing through the un-truthful eyes.

Digging deeper and deeper, as far as I can go
Finding nothing except the undivided flow.
Creeping up so fast
Laughing in the face of the past.

Crying needlessly
Laying under the burning tree
Why don't you move unless you want to die?
Well then, I hope you have some taste for the mag-pie.

Bleeding so carelessly, not remembering, not believing.
Give at least the slightest thought, to the one king.
Fleeing is so foolish,
As is being prepared as the main dish.

You may not know it,
But the eyes they sure do show it.
Hiding within the weary fangs,
Leaving you with your loving pains.

Dripping down their throats
Never asking you to remove your cloak.
How rude it was for you,
To appear from out of the dunes.

Looking at the bodies of the un-living dead,
As sad memories fill my head.
Digging deeper, as far as I can go
You can't wait until the wounds un-close.

Creeping up so fast,
Just wishing, hoping that this will last.
Please don't resent,
The one person who sent
An angel
Not worthy of lending the pill.

Just to save you
Un-sticking the from ever-holding glue
Save yourself from me
Run away from me


Follow the clouds of the sunset
Finding the blows, of the bullet.

Liek_Rawrz
06-13-2008, 08:52 PM
more poems would be nice, i'm writing one right now.....:dance:

Raven
06-13-2008, 11:39 PM
Haha, I hope your happy. I add libbed this patchwork poem just for you:

I was thinking of a poem
As I watched the sea foam
On the beach that was cold
In the days of old

Inspiration came
of poetic fame
like a holy rain
unbidden to my brain

The icy breeze
Played in the trees
The rocky shore
My depleted core

I look for life that hides from me
Just as the shore repels the sea
It roars as it's fingers reach for land
But never receives a helping hand

Why is the ocean so fascinating
I cannot help contemplating
The cold dark killer that took away
Every word I had to say

Liek_Rawrz
06-15-2008, 12:47 AM
HehHeh, yea, thnx (i guess?) i have another poem:

TITLE: **** it/Pull it

Rechin' back to the days.
When we always
Came together
And broke apart to wither.

Hello, how are you?
Come, sit down, I have some tea for you.
Oh well, get up, it's not polite to lie.
Hello, good-bye.

Tellin' eachother how we met
Always getting through the net,
Listening, ratting, looking at the waves.
Didn't you ever think about the darken caves?

I'll get it straight to 'ya man,
Don't ever oil the frying pan.
Obviously I'm being sarcastic, bro
Trying to get the flow.

They never got the right thing to say
Getting lost in the fray.
Haven't you had a last thought
About who had fought?

Listen to me
the jars are empty.
So stop looking so fruitlessly because,
You know it's hidden within the clause.

Don't act stupid to me,
You know you couldn't dissect the flea.
Just can't resent that one person
That "ruined" the all pure fun.

So stop being a child
Try the women's style,
Or possible the correct name, cam
Go for the door that reads "man"

You know it's a fake
But what the helll? It's in for some cake.
So what?
you gonna die anyway. Just deepen the cut.

I ****it,
Wishing it could split.
I stall
Trying to see through the wall.

why has it been so hard?
Distorted throught the shard?
I mean, super heroes can do it,
So why can't humans fit?

Shaking fingers shake.
Baking mothers back
Don't do it.
Do it, just Do it!

The angel
The devilWhich one is which?
I could only wish.

I pull it.
Feeling the hit.
Loving the last moments.
My heart filled with currents.

I sure do hope they're happy
After finally disecting my flea
Maknig me crack
Nver gibing in slack
This was his creation.
And I hope your.

Just.
Happy...

Liek_Rawrz
06-28-2008, 03:38 PM
Hm... noone has replied yet...

monsoon 10
06-28-2008, 04:05 PM
No triple posting or double posting.

tripletres
06-28-2008, 06:05 PM
No triple posting or double posting.
huh? what poem is that monsoon?

monsoon 10
06-28-2008, 06:40 PM
Free verse. Also I find your poem boring.

Liek_Rawrz
07-02-2008, 11:55 PM
Blah blah blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
B-I-N-G-O! B-I-N-G-O! B-I-N-G-O! and BINGO was his name-O!
Blah Blah blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
B-I-N-G-! B-I-N-G-! B-I-N-G-! and BINGO was his name-O!
Blah blah Blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
B-I-N--! B-I-N--! B-I-N--! and BINGO was his name-O!
Blah blah blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
B-I---! B-I---! B-I---! and BINGO was his name-O!
Blah Blah blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
B----! B----! B----! and BINGO was his name-O!
Blah Blah blah
And BINGO was his name-O!
-----! -----! -----! and BINGO was his naaaaaame-OOOOO!


ahhh, the classics

sparkrose
07-03-2008, 11:34 PM
a 20 second poem on
the thoughts of men

im a man
i will do what men do

i will fight for it
i will live for it

i will waste my energy on it
i will waste my life on it

im a man
i will do what men do

i will hide it from the world
i will hide if from myself

i will gather what i need
i will increase dl speed

i will do it every day
i will love roleplay

im a man
i will do what men do

with my life
i will protect
my unnatural.
love

i was like
poems!
my inspiration
http://youtube.com/watch?v=jrVdyMWxFZ8

Ryuuzaki
07-03-2008, 11:39 PM
a 20 second poem on
the thoughts of men

im a man
i will do what men do

i will fight for it
i will live for it

i will waste my energy on it
i will waste my life on it

im a man
i will do what men do

i will hide it from the world
i will hide if from myself

i will gather what i need
i will increase dl speed

i will do it every day
i will love roleplay

im a man
i will do what men do

with my life
i will protect
my unnatural.
love

i was like
poems!
my inspiration
http://youtube.com/watch?v=jrVdyMWxFZ8
Yeah that songs very inspirational...just can't see how you listened to that and then made that poem. Great poem by the way, I really enjoyed it.

Bass Test
07-04-2008, 03:25 AM
its about time
by Bass Test

face wet, feet shaking
hands ready, Ground shaking
the enemy raises
It looks like its Time

Life Stops, eyes open
I fall with my jaw broken
the counts up, and the hands are raised
the crowds cheer for the foe I faced

Its about time,
I found a place
to rest my fist
Not takeing the anymore risks

>Fight to become a Champ<

Mugen
07-05-2008, 03:01 PM
Good night my dear and sweet repose.
Sleep on your back and you won't squish your nose.

Liek_Rawrz
07-15-2008, 04:13 AM
Part of "The Raven"
By: Edgar Allan Poe.

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I ponered,
weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of
forgotten lore --
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly
there came a tapping,
As some one gently rapping, rapping at my
chamber door.
"'Tis some visiter," I muttered, "tapping at
my chamber door--
Only this and nothing more."

Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak
December,
And each seperate dying ember wrought its
ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow;--vainly I had
sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow--sorrow for
the lost Lenore--
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the
angels name Lenore--
Nameless here for evermore.

Liek_Rawrz
08-10-2008, 05:47 PM
...its dead.........

Waste
08-10-2008, 11:15 PM
My broken hearted boy
by WhatsHerName (Waste)

Tie those hands behind your back and let me have my way with you
Those blood stained lips wont get you far unless you plan to kill me
Your false gold words wont bring you luck as I have found your secret.
Whispers to walls only work when the house is completely empty
So I’ll bring you close with my poisoned fingers, you’re under my spell tonight.
I’ll guide you deep inside my soul but forgive me if I lose you.
If you see no point in your every breath then what is there for me to hope for?
My broken hearted boy.

LoKiWorlD
08-21-2008, 10:57 PM
WORSHIP
By: LoKi02
"My eyes transmits the art in my mind."


The light and darkness in your heart sets the mood, which turns night into day and day into night. For the day that comes and the day that falls depends on the soul within us all. As you close the fire in your eyes you take away our light and forever cover us in darkness. Hope for your light to guide us through what we cannot see, is more powerful than you can believe. In my eyes and in the eyes of your followers you are a goddess. Even though you are welcome in our lives, you are also feared, for the lies that fall from your lips crushes us under its weight. While time moves forward your flame slowly diminishes. But I, a devoted, will forever have faith in your victory over time. Our lives have no meaning unless you wish them to...when our prayers are not answered we become sad. Sadness then turns into anger. Anger, which blinds us from seing the truth, will never allow us to feel warmth, happiness, and joy. When i close my eyes I only hope that you will still be here when I open them. Uncloud you mind. Clense your heart. Show us the way to a new start.

Russkie
08-21-2008, 11:00 PM
I have a few poems that I wrote.

*Dun, Dun, Dun*

But I'm not entirely sure if I want to post them here, they're not exactly the kind of poems a person like me would write. Believe me, its terrifying (did I spell that right?)

Kenshy
08-22-2008, 02:24 AM
I have a few poems that I wrote.

*Dun, Dun, Dun*

But I'm not entirely sure if I want to post them here, they're not exactly the kind of poems a person like me would write. Believe me, its terrifying (did I spell that right?)

O, Russkie, I shall kill you where you stand.* Doesn't need to rhyme because it's Free Verse. It does have nice poetic touch though.

*Only used your name because you were directly above this post.

Amai-hime
08-23-2008, 06:37 AM
This is all very good! I too will post a poem. lol. I have already post this one, but not with the picture. I hope you all enjoy! Here's the link to the pic if you want to save it without the words. Here is Gray Solitude.
http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn474/AkatsukiMirage/animegirlfav150px2.jpg <<<< link to pic

http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn474/AkatsukiMirage/GraySolitudethepic.jpg

MelBrooks
08-23-2008, 06:50 AM
Death

death is approaching
slowly and coldly it churns
another one gone

sazuki13
08-23-2008, 11:49 PM
ok! this is mine! its called dream!

Drifting off in your own
Puddles of wonder and thoughts
To think or relax
Where the past can become the present
And the future that now became history
Can there be a place of such wonder
To fly away into the clouds
Into your imagination of things real or fake
A dream is a place where memories of old and new
Can come alive once again
To live in the night of day
Inside the clouds of thoughts
Falling in a pit of black
To where the exotic is normal
When gravity no longer exist
And time seems to stop in its place
And the stars can seem to shine brighter than normal
What is a dream
My own imagination of things that has overrun itself
Or could I even be dead
Seeing things that are only something else in another world
But i couldn't be or am I
I could be dreaming
Or even have a dream within a dream
This wonderful feeling of happiness
To live in a world that of I created
But even all these things that happen
It's only a dream
Or maybe reality
For we could be dreaming within a dream

Liek_Rawrz
08-24-2008, 02:56 AM
hmm. im trying for one right as i type...so. BE WARNED....!?

MelBrooks
08-24-2008, 06:05 AM
bitter sweet poetry
what the hell is with me

Magicbird
08-24-2008, 07:03 AM
lol it was fun reading them all. Im not much of a poem writer but heres one i wrote in 7th grade for school.
There was a girl from France
Who really liked to Dance
She danced all day
The Sway-A-Lay
But she realized she had no pants.

MelBrooks
08-24-2008, 06:48 PM
lets see some poetry
as i jump with glee
a squirrel jumps under my foot

Liek_Rawrz
08-24-2008, 10:46 PM
Oh forest, Oh woods
Whisper to me that you are
Always, forever.


ok, that was a really lame haiku, but it was on a whim.

saprintha
08-25-2008, 02:10 AM
sorry i know to post your own poem, but i just can hold it back. this poem wasn't written by me. it was by someone else on quizzila.com i dunno where, i can't find it, but it was really good yet sad. but again, it's not mine,so don't give me the credit.


“ONCE UPON A TIME”
Once upon a time,
There was a girl who had a painful secret.
She kept hidden from the world.
One day, she met a boy.
They spoke about everything,
Except her secret.
Months went by and she said nothing,
But her pain was becoming worse.
She couldn’t take it any longer.
That night, she spoke to no one.
She ran to her room and shut the door.
He was worried and went to speak to her,
But he was too late,
Found in her hand was a note,
“In every fairytale there is a happy ending,
Happy endings only happen in fairytales,
But, when I met you I was a princess, you were my prince.
Then I realized, fairytales can’t be real...I’m no princess...I’m just a girl.
You deserve a princess, I’m nothing, I’m sorry”,
He sat down beside her, and whispered in her ear,
“I am no prince but you were my princess, you were my everything, never nothing,
Even if you are just a girl. You were my girl and I love you,”

Russkie
08-25-2008, 02:12 AM
sorry i know to post your own poem, but i just can hold it back. this poem wasn't written by me. it was by someone else on quizzila.com i dunno where, i can't find it, but it was really good yet sad. but again, it's not mine,so don't give me the credit.


“ONCE UPON A TIME”
Once upon a time,
There was a girl who had a painful secret.
She kept hidden from the world.
One day, she met a boy.
They spoke about everything,
Except her secret.
Months went by and she said nothing,
But her pain was becoming worse.
She couldn’t take it any longer.
That night, she spoke to no one.
She ran to her room and shut the door.
He was worried and went to speak to her,
But he was too late,
Found in her hand was a note,
“In every fairytale there is a happy ending,
Happy endings only happen in fairytales,
But, when I met you I was a princess, you were my prince.
Then I realized, fairytales can’t be real...I’m no princess...I’m just a girl.
You deserve a princess, I’m nothing, I’m sorry”,
He sat down beside her, and whispered in her ear,
“I am no prince but you were my princess, you were my everything, never nothing,
Even if you are just a girl. You were my girl and I love you,”


YAY! Someone died!

*joyfuly reads again*

saprintha
08-25-2008, 02:15 AM
YAY! Someone died!

*joyfuly reads again*

LOL...haha of course of all people. glad you liked it. even thought it's not mine.::D:

Amai-hime
08-25-2008, 08:35 PM
Yes, very good, but sad... yet good.

listerlee
08-25-2008, 08:42 PM
sorry i know to post your own poem, but i just can hold it back. this poem wasn't written by me. it was by someone else on quizzila.com i dunno where, i can't find it, but it was really good yet sad. but again, it's not mine,so don't give me the credit.


“ONCE UPON A TIME”
Once upon a time,
There was a girl who had a painful secret.
She kept hidden from the world.
One day, she met a boy.
They spoke about everything,
Except her secret.
Months went by and she said nothing,
But her pain was becoming worse.
She couldn’t take it any longer.
That night, she spoke to no one.
She ran to her room and shut the door.
He was worried and went to speak to her,
But he was too late,
Found in her hand was a note,
“In every fairytale there is a happy ending,
Happy endings only happen in fairytales,
But, when I met you I was a princess, you were my prince.
Then I realized, fairytales can’t be real...I’m no princess...I’m just a girl.
You deserve a princess, I’m nothing, I’m sorry”,
He sat down beside her, and whispered in her ear,
“I am no prince but you were my princess, you were my everything, never nothing,
Even if you are just a girl. You were my girl and I love you,”

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Amai-hime
08-25-2008, 09:21 PM
lol. As am I. Very sad. Good, but sad. *smiles sadly*

MelBrooks
08-26-2008, 01:07 AM
well we gotta give you some credit for finding that

Liek_Rawrz
08-26-2008, 03:07 AM
Definately.

Amai-hime
08-26-2008, 06:21 PM
Yesh, credit. Is there a 1 out of 10 or is it 1 out of 5? lol.

saprintha
08-27-2008, 01:16 AM
well we gotta give you some credit for finding that


Definately.

heheh thanks! but not too much please.

ghigi
08-27-2008, 03:31 AM
http://naruto

Amai-hime
08-28-2008, 11:58 PM
Yesh, credit. Is there a 1 out of 10 or is it 1 out of 5? lol.

Yes, we can make the scoring go between 1 to 10. So I vote 8 out of 10. What about everyone else?

FlalesObit
09-02-2008, 09:37 PM
This is a sad poem. tis very sad

WE'RE GATHERED HERE:
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The passing of a life.
Another teenage suicide,
Another rusty knife,
Another soul that lost it's way,
Another broken heart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A world that fell apart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The absense of a voice,
Another heart felt trajedy,
Another final choice.
Another hope that fell away,
Another battle lost.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A line that's finally crossed.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A tragic loss, unfair.
At least that's what I think they'd say,
If anybody cared.

saprintha
09-03-2008, 01:16 AM
This is a sad poem. tis very sad

WE'RE GATHERED HERE:
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The passing of a life.
Another teenage suicide,
Another rusty knife,
Another soul that lost it's way,
Another broken heart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A world that fell apart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The absense of a voice,
Another heart felt trajedy,
Another final choice.
Another hope that fell away,
Another battle lost.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A line that's finally crossed.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A tragic loss, unfair.
At least that's what I think they'd say,
If anybody cared.

wow that is sad. i rate a 7/10

AngelKit
09-03-2008, 01:42 AM
I will say thats really creative work here but one I think its just not good to use a song to write a poetry thing Liek

Russkie
09-03-2008, 01:43 AM
This is a sad poem. tis very sad

WE'RE GATHERED HERE:
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The passing of a life.
Another teenage suicide,
Another rusty knife,
Another soul that lost it's way,
Another broken heart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A world that fell apart.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
The absense of a voice,
Another heart felt trajedy,
Another final choice.
Another hope that fell away,
Another battle lost.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A line that's finally crossed.
We're gathered here to mourn today,
A tragic loss, unfair.
At least that's what I think they'd say,
If anybody cared.

*Giggles with glee*

Lince
09-03-2008, 03:02 AM
Here is a short poem I wrote in about 15 minutes for reasons no one cares to know about. ^^

Angel
----------
I see you standing next to me
Though you don’t see it’s real
I watch you smile happily
From a world you cannot feel

I laugh with you, yet all alone
Telling stories you can’t hear
While you live your life without me
Growing fast year after year

I’d give anything to hold you
And to help you end up strong
But when your time comes in the end
Know I was with you all along

Okay I haven't written in years so I dunno how much it sucked. :o

saprintha
09-03-2008, 03:06 AM
Here is a short poem I wrote in about 15 minutes for reasons no one cares to know about. ^^

Angel
----------
I see you standing next to me
Though you don’t see it’s real
I watch you smile happily
From a world you cannot feel

I laugh with you, yet all alone
Telling stories you can’t hear
While you live your life without me
Growing fast year after year

I’d give anything to hold you
And to help you end up strong
But when your time comes in the end
Know I was with you all along

Okay I haven't written in years so I dunno how much it sucked. :o

oooo....i liked it. nice.

Liek_Rawrz
09-03-2008, 03:55 AM
Listen now, Listen for the lost
Listen for the weary.
Listen for you heart.

What came over the lost.
What came over the evil.
The corrupt.
To lead this wounded soul
Away from the featless desires he held.

Listen now, Listen for the world.
Listen for the riden.
Listen for thy problems.
Listen for thy soul.

Take it from me,
Don't hang on too tight,
They might just let you go.


Title: Avert not Thine Eyes


God, i hope its not to horrible.

Lince
09-03-2008, 10:44 PM
All of these poems are pretty good!
Much better then the people in my school can do. xD
I'm gonna write another random one nau. :p

FlalesObit
09-03-2008, 11:11 PM
I might post another one. I've got plenty lol XD. just gotta pick one out...maybe a happier one than my last, but no promises lol

FlalesObit
09-03-2008, 11:25 PM
ooh, I found one. ok, this was supposed to be originally a song. I wrote it a long time ago so it might sound bad, but who cares.

IF I DIE
I saw you this morning,
I wonder if you saw me.
I told you I loved you,
but secretly.
But, I wonder
just wonder,
If I told you...
could you saw the same to me?

If I died tomorrow
would you remember me?
would you remember the promises,
that you promised me?
and would you be upset,
knowing that I loved you
and on the day I die
only then,
be able to say...
I love you too.

This morning,
knowing it would be my last
I looked in your eyes
hoping you'd look back.
I saw you glance,
then look away,
what were you thinking,
and why look away?
Would you have looked longer
knowing this would be the last time?
Or would you have done the same?

And after all was done
would you still remember
all the times we never shared?
All the things we could've been,
and all the times you could've said
what you had been waiting to say...

If I died tomorrow
would you remember me?
Would you remember the promises
that you promised me?
And woud you be upset
knowing that I loved you
and on the day I died
only then,
be able to say...
I love you too.

Liek_Rawrz
09-14-2008, 08:08 AM
Awesome poems people. i'll try to pick one of mine to post soon.

soulten
09-14-2008, 09:23 AM
Roses are red
Violets are blue
zombies will eat your brain
But not mine, so sucks to be you.

That's the best I can do.

Waste
09-16-2008, 10:41 PM
Could it be possible that during its travels
good luck managed to pass me by?
Again I watch as it waves at me
From a seat on my friends back.

Is it really fair that good luck finds her comfortable
or that when my dreams are better than reality the sand man refuses to come?
Why do others get things so easily
yet i seem to have only paper to keep me afloat.

They say that love works in mysterious ways
but to be honest i'm brushing up on my dodge ball skills
so the next time cupid comes for me
i can duck.