Cup~of~Tea
05-08-2008, 09:18 PM
Hey there AnimaFuelians! I'm a new member, Cup~of~Tea :cute: and I decided to introduce myself with some of my writing! Please don't flame but constructive critisism is adored! Here is my poem, Nightmare.
A nightmare’s a secret that’s just out of reach,
A sermon the devil had wanted to preach,
A horrible wind that drags you down,
The sour bile you spew on the ground,
The eyes of nobles who’ve long been gone,
The corpse of a man floating dead in a pond,
A mystery too tight to be unraveled,
A road which many naïve ones have traveled,
The internal battle that fills you with dread,
A river of sin on the path to the dead.
So dream your dreams,
Lay down to rest,
As horrid fear fills you,
From your toes to your breast.
Just shut your eyes,
Go ditch the light,
And my dear it will be,
One hell of a night.
A nightmare’s a secret that’s just out of reach,
A sermon the devil had wanted to preach,
A horrible wind that drags you down,
The sour bile you spew on the ground,
The eyes of nobles who’ve long been gone,
The corpse of a man floating dead in a pond,
A mystery too tight to be unraveled,
A road which many naïve ones have traveled,
The internal battle that fills you with dread,
A river of sin on the path to the dead.
So dream your dreams,
Lay down to rest,
As horrid fear fills you,
From your toes to your breast.
Just shut your eyes,
Go ditch the light,
And my dear it will be,
One hell of a night.