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sapphireAT
04-12-2008, 05:53 PM
Saki laid in a bed-like machine. The steel roof covered half of her body. Two beams shining a light traced her body back forth from her hip to the head. A rectangular, red eyeglass covered her eyes for protecting the iris’s. Saki was barely nude with just her underwear and matching bra on. To the right to the top was a loft where the doctors, machines, and Nite stood. Nite looked over at Saki through the bulletproof glass. The room she was in was white paneled; florescent lights shown above.

“How is she doctor?”

“Her blood pressure has dropped dramatically. Her blood sugar level is high. She also has an abnormal heart rate.”

“Good. Anything else out of the ordinary?”

“Nothing, sire.”

“Keep me posted. I have a meeting to attend. I’ll be back to check up on her.”

“Yes, sire.”

Nite walked out of the lab and went down the hall to go upstairs to the living room where the other vampires sat and waited. There were a total of five: Joel, Bar, Rin, Makii, and Clea.
Fin was nowhere to be found.

“What’s this meeting about, my lord?” asked Makii.

“As you all know, there is a human here at Kurai Manor. I am unable to bite her. So, we are running tests to figure out why. Does anyone here have an idea?”

“I think it’s that blue rose she carried in. I heard, before, that it contained powers,” replied Joel.

“Yes, I remember my mother telling me the legend behind the blue rose.” Said Rin.

“Go ahead…. Explain,” ordered Nite.

“It is said that a power will grow once a pedal starts to fall. If the carrier is to be kissed by her true love, then a greater power or being will take it’s form and control the carrier. I say we get rid of the rose.” Rin exclaimed.
“But wouldn’t that make the being or whatever come out faster if we destroy the rose?” asked Clea.

“Oh, yea…. Never mind. Um…. What kind of being are we talking about?” asked Bar.

“Well,” Rin started to reply, “If she is kissed by her true love then it’s an archangel from heaven. If the being comes out before she is kissed then it’s a demon…. Which we could use in our favor.”

“That’s it!” exclaimed Nite with excitement.

“My lord?” everyone questioned at once.

Nite walked out of the room and walked to the lab where Saki was first placed and grabbed the rose off of the futon. Then he walked over to the lab. Doctors and nurses were kept busy taking care of Saki when Nite walked in. The rose in his hand started to glow and another pedal fell. Nite gleamed happily as he grinned. Another pedal had fallen. He plucked one more and Saki began to scream with agony.

“That’s it. Come out, demon!”

He kept plucking the pedals one by one, as Saki’s scream grew louder. The last pedal was left to be plucked when Fin entered the lab.

“What is it?” asked Nite.

“A boy is here looking for Saki. He knows we have her. He saw you fly towards this direction last night.”

“Keep him busy. I am almost done here. The demon will be out soon. He cannot stop her once transformed.”

“Too late, my lord. He’s in the lab,” said one of the doctors as they pointed out to the window.”

“You fiends! Let her go!!” yelled Riion.

Nite gleamed with pleasure once again and then said, “As you wish.”

With the remaining words he plucked the last pedal and the screams became a bird demon’s cry. Riion turned around with widen eyes as the demon tore the machine to shattered pieces of scrap metal. Gas leaked from the pipes as they whistled into the air. The demon had a female body covered with black leather belts and ribbons tied at the arms. Its devil like wings spread across the room. Very long, dark, blue hair seemed to flow with movement behind her. A red tiara was placed in the middle of her forehead: her eyes glowing turquoise blue.

“Saki…. What have they done to you?” asked Riion with puzzlement.

“You can’t get her to answer you. Her demon is in full control,” replied Nite over the intercom.

“Saki!” screamed Riion.

“Saki is dormant right now. I am Seiya.”

“Saki! Saki!”

athrun0017
04-12-2008, 06:07 PM
Part 2 really blew me away.. seiya .. that name went well.. its getting better, can't wait for the fight scene.. i like this one

archangle
04-14-2008, 03:05 PM
interesting chapter

strike7785
05-14-2008, 03:05 PM
Im enjoying this