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epoc
04-10-2008, 09:23 PM
The sun is glowing
Like the stars on the sky
Will you glow for me
In the very same way
Every star on the sky
I want to count them all
See all of them
Then give them to you

You are my glowing star
The most beautiful of them
I want to keep you
Want you all by myself
Glory to the stars in the sky
Fame to them now
Let them shine forever
Like the way you shine for me


/my friend made this so i wont take any credit for my self :P:cute:

archangle
04-11-2008, 01:21 AM
that very good writing too...u freind must be a good writer

epoc
04-11-2008, 05:17 AM
i'll post an other one abit later :P

monsoon 10
04-14-2008, 02:19 AM
The sun is glowing
Like the stars on the sky
Will you glow for me
In the very same way
Every star on the sky
I want to count them all
See all of them
Then give them to you

You are my glowing star
The most beautiful of them
I want to keep you
Want you all by myself
Glory to the stars in the sky
Fame to them now
Let them shine forever
Like the way you shine for me


/my friend made this so i wont take any credit for my self :P:cute:

I think your friend is coming on to you.

epoc
04-14-2008, 05:14 AM
she didn't write it for me xD and... she is engaged ^_^

epoc
04-16-2008, 06:57 AM
The Angel
An angel is sitting on a bench,
the whole world is flying by.
no one notice her,
nobody sees her.
the roses in her arms,
Black of sorrow from her heart.
A lonely tear is falling,
hits the rose without a sound.
no one sees her Pain,
Nobody sees her sorrows.
She is alone in the world,
she is the only one of her kind.


An other one ^_^ Sitting in school now :P well ^_^ hope you like it.
it's still hers.

sapphireAT
04-16-2008, 04:51 PM
i wish i could be that descriptive in my poems like that ..i love it!
saph:fruit::cute:

epoc
04-17-2008, 10:02 AM
Here it comes :D

The rain is falling slowly
Just like my tears
You left me here
Alone in darkness

Why did you leave me?
Couldn’t you stay here?
Someone is hurt
Somebody is crying

The Light is fading away
Just like my heart
Like my love for you
Time is running out

Faith is against us
No one can tell the truth
You left in anger
I cried in sorrow

Still no credit to me!

monsoon 10
04-19-2008, 02:06 AM
she didn't write it for me xD and... she is engaged ^_^

I still stand by my statement.