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[Ariya]

Pain haunts my every core
But beauty kills me so much more
Just one breath
You devise
A tragic fantasy
Embrased with lies

Waking fear wins my war
I could not take this anymore
Just I, searching
For a heart once lost
now found
But at what cost?

[archangle]

where do u come up with all these good poems....ahh i hope i could write that good for my homework

[epoc]

great poem ^_^ my friend is also writing poems =) you want me to post afew ?

[archangle]

ya epoc u should post them

[epoc]

i'm gonna ask her to send me a few ^_^

[Jack]

The way that I interpret this poem is as the description of an inner-war. A mess of confusion and chaos but enough peace to make out the circumstances. Thoughts that haunt your mind relentlessly. Certain parts can be translated a number of ways depending on the person but the poem holds a deeper, sadder meaning to me, personally.

-Jack

[jamjfly]

*stares at the screen* *still staring at the screen* *awestruck* How do you do that?! These poems are brilliant. I love them.