a poem by me

[gaara44]

You know I can't trust you
You're the one who never saw
what you did

You said you never care
So why are you saying sorry
This fight's going no where
But no-one cares

You might want to be my friend
but i never care
you weren't there for me
and now you say sorry

I saw what you've done
and i see what
you have become

I want to know
what’s inside you
show your true feelings
and try to be true

somethings inside of you
its anger or hate
i never wanted
you to be in this state

so please just calm down
and never let go
never give me a frown
when all that goes to show

how you really have
feelings for someone
and you never
want to let go

[Luna_]

that was great, I loved it.

[starscream]

Good but next time lets try to put it in the correct forum. Hhhhmmmm, Maybe creative writing?

[GiGi22337]

This is good :)