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AkiTorrien
08-24-2009, 01:53 AM
It's been one year
since the earth shook
And the ground cracked

Mountains crumbled
Oceans dried up.
The world was shattered.

The grass dried up
the flowers withered.
Life slowly slipped away.

No more light,
Only cold, cruel darkness remains.

The world is nothing but a barren field
lost for all
eternity.

It's been one year
since the earth shook..
One year since the world
ended...

Fox Girl
08-24-2009, 02:14 AM
Great Poem Aki! I really like it! ^^

Bobadoe
08-24-2009, 03:11 AM
EPIC!!!!!

I really like it... *HIGH FIVES*

And do no treat me like I do not get the meaning...

Still Epic...

alsharid
08-24-2009, 08:21 AM
I give you the legendary thumbs up for a job well done. It's fantastic! MumTaz(Excellent)