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JessaBaby
08-18-2009, 11:11 PM
Arms legs
Soul
Strapped to the table
As she pounds nails into the joints of every finger
I scream in pain
And she laughs
A mad laugh
Sanity is gone
And The one I love the most
Locked behind bars
Forced to see and hear
"Beg for your life" She yells
My answer
"Beg for a life I do not care for? Or beg for a life I cherish?
Save her
and you can kill me"
The demon laughs again
Then gets close to my face
Her lips close to my ear
Her hand digging its way into my flesh
Her fingers wrapping around my heart
"Your wish shall be granted"
Then darkness engulfs me
Bobadoe
08-18-2009, 11:14 PM
Hmmmm....This reminds me of a song...but I will not say which.

8.5/10
JessaBaby
08-18-2009, 11:29 PM
Hmmmm....This reminds me of a song...but I will not say which.

8.5/10

Really? The poem is based off the anime "Higurashi no Naku Koro ni"
I loved it sooo much I had to write a poem ^.^
Zero Ichi
08-18-2009, 11:31 PM
a good poem, but such suffering and sacrifice, it makes me wanna reach my hand out for comfort

EDIT: now i feel like satoshi, such a tragic tale...
JessaBaby
08-19-2009, 07:02 PM
a good poem, but such suffering and sacrifice, it makes me wanna reach my hand out for comfort

EDIT: now i feel like satoshi, such a tragic tale...

Very true very sad!
thaty
08-19-2009, 09:39 PM
Wow that's so cruel... but I like it.... it's good...
ricecake
08-19-2009, 10:05 PM
I like how you were able to write a very dark but great poem to relate to an Anime you like. Keep up the great work Jessa!!
Fox Girl
08-19-2009, 11:05 PM
Sound really good to me! I hope you do more poems in the future. ^^
cutieB
08-19-2009, 11:10 PM
That was really crazy but it was good very nice.