Let Me Lead You Through The Night

[Ariya]

Wow, it's been awhile since I've posted up a poem. Well, here's one for you all! Enjoy~
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I sacrificed my heart,
Let down my guard,
Completely gave into you,
No matter how hard.

I threw away my dreams,
Believed countless lies,
And all for what?
For you to toss me aside?

Now more than ever,
I feel insufferable pain,
Why am I not worth it to you?
Do you anticipate no gain?

I have so much to offer,
Yet you continue to ignore,
My essence, my being,
All of this, you seem to abhor.

Please, take down your barricade,
And open the door you closed,
Lend me a chance to show you the night,
Give in to which you oppose.

[Jack]

This piece seems less abstract than a majority of your others but in that aspect more relative. And do I mean relative. You've translated the emotions and thoughts in such a way that it's simple, yet beautiful. The fact that it's easy to understand also adds to the irony of the meaning of the poem itself.

I wonder if some of the features are intended but overall it's a great, easily enjoyable poem.

-Jack

[jamjfly]

Very Very Very Very beautiful. It was a very beautiful poem. I loved it.

[Shigami]

I don't like poems for one main reason,They are completely useless to humanity.They do not encourage,do not educate you,and do not under any circumstances entertain you whatsoever.

~ My opinion

[cindy]

BRAVO !!! ... i loved it ^^ ... i think u should create a book of all ur poems and publish it ^^ lol ... no lies ... it rhymed soo well and it made sense ALOT ^^