Bobadoe
08-12-2009, 03:44 AM
I wrote this 2 years ago and had been looking for it for weeks. I was just exiting High School. It seems like it was written by a freshmen, my writing skills have always been sub-par. I just started writing and paid no attention to my classes. This is what I wrote.
(The)
-Someone was here
A figure in the night
-Someone was here
A sly evil being
-Someone was here
Items thrown all about
-Someone was here
Perpetual darkness
-Someone was here
The one has what one needs
-Someone was here
A shiver of iced fear
-Someone was here
Somewhere to begin with
-Someone was here
YES,YES the room of two
-Someone was here
THE SHOTS, AGAIN, THE SHOTS
-Someone was here
Fog is to be proud of
-Someone was here
The closest thing is death
-Someone was here
Where else did the one go
-Someone was here
In the black room for now
-Someone was here
Taking, and taking away
-Someone was here
Where to go, and where from
-Someone was here
Behind lies sanity
-Someone was here
WHERE DID HE GO, AND WHY
-Someone was here
YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU DO
-Someone was here
They've taken, where are they
-Someone was here
Hanging from a steel chain
-Someone was here
Cannot hold on...my....my..
-Someone was here
I have lost my mind
-Someone was here
END
Okay, this is kinda bad but, now every groupings last word in every other line makes a sentence. The first groups sentence begins with (The.)
Remember I have no idea what this means. All I did was obsessively write it.
(The)
-Someone was here
A figure in the night
-Someone was here
A sly evil being
-Someone was here
Items thrown all about
-Someone was here
Perpetual darkness
-Someone was here
The one has what one needs
-Someone was here
A shiver of iced fear
-Someone was here
Somewhere to begin with
-Someone was here
YES,YES the room of two
-Someone was here
THE SHOTS, AGAIN, THE SHOTS
-Someone was here
Fog is to be proud of
-Someone was here
The closest thing is death
-Someone was here
Where else did the one go
-Someone was here
In the black room for now
-Someone was here
Taking, and taking away
-Someone was here
Where to go, and where from
-Someone was here
Behind lies sanity
-Someone was here
WHERE DID HE GO, AND WHY
-Someone was here
YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU DO
-Someone was here
They've taken, where are they
-Someone was here
Hanging from a steel chain
-Someone was here
Cannot hold on...my....my..
-Someone was here
I have lost my mind
-Someone was here
END
Okay, this is kinda bad but, now every groupings last word in every other line makes a sentence. The first groups sentence begins with (The.)
Remember I have no idea what this means. All I did was obsessively write it.