Misunderstood

[giovanni r]

I was scared and tried to run
They said I needed help,
But there was no one to run to.
No one would here .
No one would care.

Pain and hurt took the wheel.
They streeded me to my fate.
Empty hearts and eyes watched.
While I comitt myself.
Into a world where I am misunderstood.

[runt32a]

thats really good but when you said "No one would here" dont you mean "hear" and not "here" lol i think that would make more scence to the readers dont you? please correct me if im wrong..

[giovanni r]

umm.... Yeah boy you are telling me how to spell when YOU misspelled sense

[runt32a]

at least i didnt misspell hear lol and i do amit my spelling isn't the best lol

[giovanni r]

Well dont tell me that if you do the same thing!!!! jk

[runt32a]

im better then you at spelling jk jk i cant really say that cause i type fast often which sometimes makes me misspell something if im not careful sometimes but im getting better and better since im on the pc all the time chating and all that lol and im sure you are lol

[giovanni r]

you are like just like me and yeah i love chatrooms!!!

[runt32a]

ummm just like you no in ways yes fully no but by what you mean i could agree that we are alike but at the same time we are completely different my friend completely different

[giovanni r]

well yeah of coarse we have our differances but thats what makes us us!!! so duhhh

[runt32a]

ummmmmmmmmmmmm

[giovanni r]

what does that mean???

[runt32a]

hum..oh im just lost in thought thats all.....

[giovanni r]

K well you can tell me anything you know that right i wont judge.... promise!!

[runt32a]

oh i see im a deep thinker and even though i dont let my past bother me often i still get lost in thats all it was just my past i was thinkin of nothing really important..as for being judged i am far use to it..its just like being mocked to me and i am use to a lot of stuff or get use to em quickly

[giovanni r]

wow, same here ... its just certain ast memories that i dwell on!!

[runt32a]

ah i see um unlike you then i dont dwell on my past i think back on it to see how far i have come and to keep moving forward and grow even stronger it may hurt at times but i still use it to keep going you may find me interesting because of my ways when im just a kid that goes by my own ways n path living my life and nothing more

[Bobadoe]

Just here to break up the monotony.....BIG SMILE!!!

[giovanni r]

Awww you didnt even read my poem???*slaps off bigsmile*!!!!!!

[runt32a]

lol whats the point in sayin something without readin da poem when thats what this thread is mostly about even though we went off that topic lol

[giovanni r]

ummmmmm yeah??

[Bobadoe]

Awww you didnt even read my poem???*slaps off bigsmile*!!!!!!

I read it. I just do not, and I repeat do not, reply to others work unless I have put forth something of my own.

I know it is weird but that is just how odd I am.

No need to be mean about it.

[giovanni r]

otay?!?!?!? Your cool dont worry, my poem sucked anyway!!

[quietchat]

First read of this, I have to wonder if you got several words confused, and I also wonder if you may have written some of the lines out of order.

Second read, I kinda get what you are aiming to tell with this, but I'm still easily thrown off by what I would consider errors.

Third read, I can start get past what throws me off and I'm actually paying attention to the words themselves, and it seems like a first person narritive in a horror film script.

Fourth read, putting all of that behind. I'm reading it, and it's complex enough to keep me interested, but not enough for me to actually be a fan of it.

[giovanni r]

you are sooooooo the next american idol judge

why must you look into it that much??!?!

[giovanni r]

really???Im sorry!!!!! (is that good or bad??)