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starscream
08-03-2009, 04:03 AM
YOU


Why can you make
my thoughts disappear
with one single glance
from your sweet eyes my dear?

Why can I sit
and listen to you breath
like each soft inhale
was meant just for me?

Why does one touch
from your smooth perfect skin
Ignite a warm fire
that burns from within.

Why does the smell
of your hair so long and bright
make me feel safe
when I lay with you at night

How do you do it
with just three little words
To hear them from you
is something I do not deserve.

So I promise you
until my dying breath
that I will stand beside you
and no day will I regret.

wingstro
08-03-2009, 04:10 AM
Good suft,thats good Starscream

runt32a
08-03-2009, 06:18 AM
thats really good

BlueSano
08-03-2009, 12:12 PM
wow... so good.. i really enjoyed it ~!

bloodgurl8
08-03-2009, 08:16 PM
*smiles* I like it. Very nice starscream.

AkiTorrien
08-03-2009, 09:35 PM
Amazing, well written poem =3

salmeria
08-04-2009, 02:26 AM
really good .. !!! :D

gunslinger
08-06-2009, 05:19 PM
nice keep it up

I'm a Bitch
08-06-2009, 05:56 PM
:kawaii: that was so cute . i loved it

giovanni r
08-06-2009, 08:06 PM
That poem made me want to be that girl... !!!!

vinkie35
08-08-2009, 06:58 PM
wow that's a nice poem
wish i had as mutch talent as you do :)

ScarletSky
08-19-2009, 01:14 AM
*smiles* I like it. Very nice starscream.

i bet you did

cutieB
08-19-2009, 01:51 AM
That was awesome I liked this one as well.