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JessaBaby
07-30-2009, 06:28 PM
I'm Sorry....
Sorry I fell
Fell hard
Hard feelings
Feelings I have for you
You who hit my heart
Heartfelt truth
Truth that I want to throwaway
Throwaway because I....
I love you
You who can never....
Never love me back
Back facing you as I confess
Confess thy love
Love that you can never accept, I see your tears
Tears flow down your face
Face you I cannot
Cannot see the tears as you say....
Say "Get out, Love you I cannot" But.....
But I can't
Can't UnLove you

ricecake
07-30-2009, 10:55 PM
Very nice way to incorporate the last word into the new sentence. I liked this poem alot, keep up the great work

JessaBaby
07-31-2009, 03:39 PM
Very nice way to incorporate the last word into the new sentence. I liked this poem alot, keep up the great work

Lol thank you I'm glad you noticed :)

SkY93
08-01-2009, 02:15 AM
Very nice way to incorporate the last word into the new sentence. I liked this poem alot, keep up the great work

that was really awesome... i liked it alot

runt32a
08-01-2009, 06:05 AM
thats really good it truly is

I'm a Bitch
08-01-2009, 06:33 PM
i like ! keep writing !

salmeria
08-05-2009, 09:27 PM
really gd !! keep it up ..

giovanni r
08-06-2009, 07:48 PM
Daaaaaaammnnnnn!!!!! Girl, I would have never, EVER thought of doing a poem like this!!! You have got some serious talent!!! But you already knew that!!