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AkiTorrien
07-24-2009, 07:44 AM
(Here is another poem that I wrote for class. We had to write a story (Sadly I haven't got around to posting that story here yet) anyway we had to write a story and then we had to write a poem that was based on that story. So here it is)

Running Running
Must get away
To save myself
To see the next day.

I can't control how nature planned it
it wasn't my fault
nature has it's course
we just follow it.

It was raining that night
the street was dark
the rain was pouring
It wasn't my fault!

The car spin out of control
took his life
not me!
Please understand!

Let me live
He wouldn't want this!
A brother's Idol taking a life?
What Idol would you be if you did that?
Not a good one.

Spare me please
For I am sorry
Nature had its course
and we can't change that.

Running Running
Must get away
To save myself
To see the next day.

Starfire
07-24-2009, 08:30 AM
Another great story. Way to go Aki!

fazenda
07-24-2009, 08:31 AM
no offense, but what kind of poem is that

I only somewhat know of 2, the kind that rime and a haiku that is about the syllables in a sentence.

Zero Ichi
07-24-2009, 08:35 AM
not all poems have to rhyme, faz, i know a good amount of poems by published authors that dont use rhyme in their poems

fazenda
07-29-2009, 05:46 PM
not all poems have to rhyme, faz, i know a good amount of poems by published authors that dont use rhyme in their poems

I know that not all poems need to rime that is why I mentioned haiku.
but they usually follow some rule, otherwise they are random incomplete sentences.

I know there is more than a few kinds of poems but I don't know the differences between them, I was simply asking what kind of poem it was(that is why I added the "no offense").