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AkiTorrien
07-24-2009, 07:38 AM
(Once again another poem that I wrote for an assignment. We had to chose an archetype and write a poem about it. So I chose to the wounded Child and wrote a poem, basing it on one of my characters)

A child hurt, in pain,alone.
A child silently cries in the middle of the night.
cries when no one is watching
fakes smiles when they are.

She helps feed a stay a kitten.
helps an old lady across the street.
gives a penny to the homeless
does anything to avoid going home.

When she has to go home
it is nothing but hurt, heartache
distrust and sadness.

Her life, she knows it will always be sore
always will she have to feel alone
broken glass
shattered memories
all she wants
is to be loved.

Zero Ichi
07-24-2009, 08:32 AM
This is good, aki, a tearalmost broke out i wanna give that character of yours a hug, its tough when home really isnt the home you want!

Starfire
07-24-2009, 08:33 AM
I cried manly tears. A solid A.

runt32a
07-28-2009, 10:26 AM
thats really good aki keep up the great work