A shattered pure

[JessaBaby]

I am a young girl.........
I go to church, pray to God, and I give everything I have to God
I am a young girl.........
I go to school, get good grades, and is loved by everyone
I am the perfect girl.....
I am pure, kind, loving, caring.......
But I am the hurting girl....
Who wishes she were someone else, hoping its all a dream, praying he'll go away
I am the outsider.........
I've seen her scars, seen her hurting, seen her eyes pleading for help.....but never,
Never reaching out
And I am the writer who's telling this story
That perfect girl is a good girl but the word perfect is only describing the girl........
Not her life
A young girl..................A young girl!
Who still stays pure
Even after all the pain and abuse
That outsider sees the scars, the pain, and the pleading in her eyes....
But that outsider might not understand or to afraid...to speak...
Now let me explain
All I have to say to show who "He" is, to show where the abuse comes from.........
When he sneaks into her bedroom at night and says "My sweet,sweet daughter"
And she can't help but cry when he leaves.....................

[wi_sam]

Are you really a young girl, though?

[JessaBaby]

Are you really a young girl, though?

Lol I heard a story of a young girl who had been rape by her father every night for 8 years before he got caught, it just made me so sad because I was also abused by older men when I was little. I just wrote this to get my feelings out because really, how can a young girl stay so nice and so pure.........even after all that?

I'm only 15 so I'm between young girl and older teen :P

[ricecake]

Wow. that was very good!

[Utauh]

it's an great poem :)