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x_lilium_x
07-17-2009, 11:57 PM
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Last night you plagued my dreams again
I was astounded, it's way above my kin
You were standing at the edge of a den
Must I approach you? I don't think I can

For even in my dreams,
you made my heart beat
For a thousand times that could
tore any sheet
I could feel your soul and radiating heart
And your melting stare,
that made this heart writhe.

You're so close yet so far away
I hear things from you,
I know you wouldn't say
You made my desolate life, full of colored ray
That made a person out of me,
so different from yesterday

Then you spread your black wings
that caused to unmask
a heavenly being beneath the glorious dusk
would you take me to the sky-
is that too much to ask?
Would you even smile, before I turn into dust?

it was a pure unyielding bliss
exhibited in a short time
For our hearts beat in an unlikely same rhyme
A swift fantasy I wouldn't exchange
for billions of dime
For you're my angel, an angel
I'll love through time

ricecake
07-18-2009, 02:43 AM
Your poem was really nice, hope you have more to share and keep up the good work ^^

Starfire
07-18-2009, 12:27 PM
A solid B plus, good job.

x_lilium_x
07-19-2009, 04:35 AM
thanks. :)