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AkiTorrien
06-22-2009, 03:15 AM
(Okay so I wrote this poem, just to let emotions out)

How could I have been so blind?
the light was right there, right in front of me.
But I was blinded by hateful emotions,
Emotions that I believed were true..
I didn't see, I couldn't see
the light was there in front of me.
but I was trapped and at that point in time, I believed to free.

How stupid
dumb
reckless I was
I didn't want to leave
I didn't notice it.

Now My world is standing still
and I can't run
I can't fly
So I cry
"How long will it be till I see that light again"

I secretly prey each night
and I know I will not give up
I wont not be dragged down
I will fight
for when I see that light
I know, I know
I will be alright.

ricecake
06-22-2009, 03:21 AM
Wow Aki, you outdid yourself on this one! Letting your emotions out and being free with how you feel, very nice

cutieB
06-22-2009, 03:27 AM
I really like it good job aki.

starscream
06-22-2009, 04:09 AM
*crying* Oustanding dear. Simply awsome.

Inuyasha50
06-24-2009, 01:09 PM
That is a nice poem Aki, it is very touching on how you feel.

alleon20
07-16-2009, 05:51 PM
Very cool and emotional, maybe you should do that more often Aki