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AkiTorrien
06-04-2009, 12:49 AM
((Just some random poem I came up with earlier on, I though I would share with you all))


I want to spend nights under stars with him.
Lie on the couch and watch lame movies
only to fall asleep in each others arms half way though.

I want to sleep the day and night away
in his arms, as he holds me.
I want to hear him say "I love you"
knowing I can say it too.

I want to to see his smiling face each morning.
and kiss me as I wake
I want to cry on his shoulder
only to have him wrap his arms around my waist.


Take him to be my one and only
and cherish him day by day.
I love him and that love grows with each passing day.

giovanni r
06-04-2009, 12:51 AM
We may hate each other but i cant denie your talent!!!!!

ricecake
06-04-2009, 12:59 AM
Very nice!! Hope your poem comes true for you one day!!!!

starscream
06-04-2009, 06:36 AM
I hope you get everything and everyone you want. So bueatiful Dear.

soulten
06-04-2009, 06:51 AM
I hope you get everything and everyone you want. So bueatiful Dear.

Beautiful
GRAMMAR NAZI STRIKES!!!

Anyways very nice.

runt32a
06-11-2009, 11:09 PM
thats really good Aki keep it up you have great talents maybe one day you can publish some of your writings too

Shadower
06-12-2009, 03:10 AM
That really a beautiful poem, you have great talents in writing ^^