AkiTorrien
03-10-2009, 06:01 AM
(Note: Title not by me, Title name was given by Sadrith)
(I wrote this story in January)
(Just a short simple idea I came up with walking home from school)
(The italics are thinking of course but also Songs and then ending..)
(Enjoy)
“Just an ordinary day
Started out the same old way
Then I looked into your eyes and knew
Today would be a first for me
The day I fall in love “
The voice of a young lady echoed thought the forest that beautiful spring afternoon. The trees were bright, lushes and all shades of green. The Sky was as blue as ever with no clouds. The suns rays cascaded across the land and pelted the ground, warming it up. The birds were singing happily that morning and their voices also echoed thought the forest.
I was sitting by a pond that beautiful day. My legs were lightly soaking in the crystal clear river that ran through the west side of the forest. I smiled and looked around, closing my blue eyes. It felt nice having the sun beat down on my long, light brown hair – relaxing and peaceful it was. I brushed my bangs out of my eyes, opening them and letting out a smile. I looked down at my wrists. Around them, on each wrist was a bracelet made from shells. They have been in the family since my grandparents time. My head turned to look at the beautiful painted horse. Her name is Starletta and I have raised her ever since she was a foal. I looked down at my reflection in the water that I could see ever so clearly. I sighed happily, a few bangs falling into my eyes. I genitally brushed them out of my eyes and continued to watch my reflection. Suddenly Starletta let out a loud neigh and raised up on her back legs. She had heard something and had became startled.I jumped up and ran over towards her, lightly brushing a hand along her mane.
“Its okay girl, calm down,”
She neighed again and then I heard the bushes rustling. I turned around and reached into my bag, pulling out a knife and holding in attack stance. Suddenly two men appeared out of the bush, looked around and smirked. One man had amber colored eyes and grey hair and the other had green eyes and redish hair color. I narrowed my eyes and looked at them, staying on alert in case they tried anything. They turned to me and their eyes widened.
“Well well well, what do we have here?” The red haired asked, walking towards me.
“Hmm I don't know, but dannnnnnng is that girl ever hot,” responded the grey haired.
“Hey chick? Who are you..? I swear I have seen you before...are..you like the chick..whats her name?...ohh Arcadia...” The red haired said getting closer, there was a chuckle in his voice and both men reeked of alcohol.
I shook my head and turned to walk away. Suddenly I felt something wrap around my wrists – barbed wire. They had thrown barbed towards me and caught my wrists. I didnt pull because I knew that if I pulled, the wire would cut into my skin. I looked around and saw Starletta was getting very frantic. I had to try to remain calm and think on how to escape. The red haired smirked and pulled on the wire alittle, making me wince.
“I asked you question girly...you..answer it!” The red haired angerly snapped at me.
I refused to answer his question. Suddenly the sound of a bullet being fired echoed through the forest. A bullet flew out for the bushes and perfectly cut the wire that was in the mans hand. I broke free and looked around but no one was around. There was not a shadow or a figure around. The men started to get scared.
“Who's there? Show yourselfs!” The grey haired man called out shaking.
“No one is here....this place is haunted..!!!!” Yelled the red hair man
I blinked for a second and then smirked as the two men ran around in a circle, flailing their arms around scared. They stopped and then stared at each other for a second and then let out a scream. They ran off into the bushes screaming for their mommies.
I chuckled alittle and then I let out a light sigh. I wondered what those two men wanted with me. In these days it is not safe to walk around by yourself. For me...well I have been on my own for awhile now so I have learned to take care of myself. I was born in a small, peaceful town. I was given the name Arcadia. It was my mother's middle name. Birthed too a very kind hearted young women and..I stoped for a second and looked around the area. I had began rideing Starletta again and had ended up on a dirt path. The sun was now begining to set. The sky was now a mx of all very bright colors. Red, orange, yellow, orange, purple, golden now all cascaded across the setting sky, the night would soon be upon the world. Anyway as I was saying, I was born to a kind hearted young women and my father...I don't talk about my father, he was an ass, he abandoned me and my mother when I was only 4 years old. I hate my father for what he did. I never knew why..was it my fault? Was I bad child?...I bet it was that..All I want to know is..why he left me and my mother..didnt he love us..? I guess I will never know why, I don't remember much about that day. Sadly...I have no memory of him...all I remember is that his vocie was calm, lovaly and warmly.. My parents are both dead...I visit their grave every single year.
About an hour later I arrived at a small town. I visit this town every year when I when I visit my parents grave. The town is very nice, the people are not rude or bossy. Everyone is very gental and friendly. Every time I come to this place I always visit this one bar. I dont drink, no never. I have seen what alcohol can do to a person, and I swore I would never end up like that. I petted Starletta's mane and climbed down off her. We approuched the outside of the bar. It was old looking and the brown was wood colored. I grabbed the reins on Starletta and tied them around a post and then I walked inside. I entered the bar and the quietness I was in before outside, had now changed to rowdy, uproaring people. I looked around the place. Nothing was out of the ordinary, except there was a man sitting in the corner with a hooden cloak that covered his eyes. He was sitting there alone, no one was talking to him or even attemping to. I was gussing he was one those people that everyone disliked. Like my mother...I rememeber my mother use to tell me stories how her parents were killed and she was raised on the streets. She would always tell me how people would dislike her and shun her away, even when she was a child. She told she would be beat and tormented by the villagers. My eyes went sad for a second and my head looked down, the bangs covered my eyes as a tear fell from my eyes. She told me that the day she met my father was the happiest day of her life.
I am splitting this up into two posts. next post is part two.
(I wrote this story in January)
(Just a short simple idea I came up with walking home from school)
(The italics are thinking of course but also Songs and then ending..)
(Enjoy)
“Just an ordinary day
Started out the same old way
Then I looked into your eyes and knew
Today would be a first for me
The day I fall in love “
The voice of a young lady echoed thought the forest that beautiful spring afternoon. The trees were bright, lushes and all shades of green. The Sky was as blue as ever with no clouds. The suns rays cascaded across the land and pelted the ground, warming it up. The birds were singing happily that morning and their voices also echoed thought the forest.
I was sitting by a pond that beautiful day. My legs were lightly soaking in the crystal clear river that ran through the west side of the forest. I smiled and looked around, closing my blue eyes. It felt nice having the sun beat down on my long, light brown hair – relaxing and peaceful it was. I brushed my bangs out of my eyes, opening them and letting out a smile. I looked down at my wrists. Around them, on each wrist was a bracelet made from shells. They have been in the family since my grandparents time. My head turned to look at the beautiful painted horse. Her name is Starletta and I have raised her ever since she was a foal. I looked down at my reflection in the water that I could see ever so clearly. I sighed happily, a few bangs falling into my eyes. I genitally brushed them out of my eyes and continued to watch my reflection. Suddenly Starletta let out a loud neigh and raised up on her back legs. She had heard something and had became startled.I jumped up and ran over towards her, lightly brushing a hand along her mane.
“Its okay girl, calm down,”
She neighed again and then I heard the bushes rustling. I turned around and reached into my bag, pulling out a knife and holding in attack stance. Suddenly two men appeared out of the bush, looked around and smirked. One man had amber colored eyes and grey hair and the other had green eyes and redish hair color. I narrowed my eyes and looked at them, staying on alert in case they tried anything. They turned to me and their eyes widened.
“Well well well, what do we have here?” The red haired asked, walking towards me.
“Hmm I don't know, but dannnnnnng is that girl ever hot,” responded the grey haired.
“Hey chick? Who are you..? I swear I have seen you before...are..you like the chick..whats her name?...ohh Arcadia...” The red haired said getting closer, there was a chuckle in his voice and both men reeked of alcohol.
I shook my head and turned to walk away. Suddenly I felt something wrap around my wrists – barbed wire. They had thrown barbed towards me and caught my wrists. I didnt pull because I knew that if I pulled, the wire would cut into my skin. I looked around and saw Starletta was getting very frantic. I had to try to remain calm and think on how to escape. The red haired smirked and pulled on the wire alittle, making me wince.
“I asked you question girly...you..answer it!” The red haired angerly snapped at me.
I refused to answer his question. Suddenly the sound of a bullet being fired echoed through the forest. A bullet flew out for the bushes and perfectly cut the wire that was in the mans hand. I broke free and looked around but no one was around. There was not a shadow or a figure around. The men started to get scared.
“Who's there? Show yourselfs!” The grey haired man called out shaking.
“No one is here....this place is haunted..!!!!” Yelled the red hair man
I blinked for a second and then smirked as the two men ran around in a circle, flailing their arms around scared. They stopped and then stared at each other for a second and then let out a scream. They ran off into the bushes screaming for their mommies.
I chuckled alittle and then I let out a light sigh. I wondered what those two men wanted with me. In these days it is not safe to walk around by yourself. For me...well I have been on my own for awhile now so I have learned to take care of myself. I was born in a small, peaceful town. I was given the name Arcadia. It was my mother's middle name. Birthed too a very kind hearted young women and..I stoped for a second and looked around the area. I had began rideing Starletta again and had ended up on a dirt path. The sun was now begining to set. The sky was now a mx of all very bright colors. Red, orange, yellow, orange, purple, golden now all cascaded across the setting sky, the night would soon be upon the world. Anyway as I was saying, I was born to a kind hearted young women and my father...I don't talk about my father, he was an ass, he abandoned me and my mother when I was only 4 years old. I hate my father for what he did. I never knew why..was it my fault? Was I bad child?...I bet it was that..All I want to know is..why he left me and my mother..didnt he love us..? I guess I will never know why, I don't remember much about that day. Sadly...I have no memory of him...all I remember is that his vocie was calm, lovaly and warmly.. My parents are both dead...I visit their grave every single year.
About an hour later I arrived at a small town. I visit this town every year when I when I visit my parents grave. The town is very nice, the people are not rude or bossy. Everyone is very gental and friendly. Every time I come to this place I always visit this one bar. I dont drink, no never. I have seen what alcohol can do to a person, and I swore I would never end up like that. I petted Starletta's mane and climbed down off her. We approuched the outside of the bar. It was old looking and the brown was wood colored. I grabbed the reins on Starletta and tied them around a post and then I walked inside. I entered the bar and the quietness I was in before outside, had now changed to rowdy, uproaring people. I looked around the place. Nothing was out of the ordinary, except there was a man sitting in the corner with a hooden cloak that covered his eyes. He was sitting there alone, no one was talking to him or even attemping to. I was gussing he was one those people that everyone disliked. Like my mother...I rememeber my mother use to tell me stories how her parents were killed and she was raised on the streets. She would always tell me how people would dislike her and shun her away, even when she was a child. She told she would be beat and tormented by the villagers. My eyes went sad for a second and my head looked down, the bangs covered my eyes as a tear fell from my eyes. She told me that the day she met my father was the happiest day of her life.
I am splitting this up into two posts. next post is part two.