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03-01-2009, 02:56 PM
I figured that since I posted my fanfic in my other forum that I should share it with you all here as well. This is a fanfic about Naruto and it starts off after Sasuke has killed Orochimaru but not too much farther ahead than that.
Authors Note: Just to let everyone know I wrote this just over a year ago and it was my first attempt at any sort of fanfic, or developmental writing. So the description/imagery is somewhat lacking. However, the ideas are there, and in future chapters there is significant improvement (or so I am told) so please don't be scared off early on. Anyways here you go, enjoy!
A New Dawn Breaks. Chapter 1: Old Friends, New Assignment!
“Try Harder Naruto!” Jiraiya shouted at Naruto while they were busy training to develop and complete the Rasen shuriken.
“Hey ero sannin is it time for a break yet…you’ve been working me day in and day out.” Naruto was on his knees gasping for air and favouring his right arm as it was in pain due to it being overworked.
“Well I do guess you have been working hard enough…so I’ll give you the rest of the day off.” Jiraiya finally gave in and gave Naruto his break for the day so he can rest up for tomorrows training again.
“Finally, now I can see how everyone else is doing” Naruto was just leaving the training grounds of where they were training right when Jiraiya stopped him for a moment.
“Hey Naruto wait for a second, you can go…but on one condition.” Jiraiya grinned at Naruto while Naruto was anxious to get out of there and relax for the first time in a long time.
“Aww c’mon ero sannin, you said I could go now please let me go” as Naruto awaited Jiraiya’s request all Jiraiya could do was grin.
“Okay here’s the deal Naruto, I need you to perform that jutsu you’ve been practising for me.” Jiraiya has a big smile on his face awaiting Naruto’s answer.
“You mean the one you said to never use on you? But doesn’t that disobey your very own orders?” Naruto looked very puzzled due to Jiraiya’s decision.
“Yes! I know that Naruto just do as I say and you can go and do as you please.” Jiraiya was starting to get frustrated and impatient so Naruto finally decided to perform his jutsu.
“Alright whatever you say ero sannin, just remember you asked me to do this…HAREM NO JUTSU!” Naruto performed the jutsu summoning countless women flaunting around Jiraiya for a few moments. When the Jutsu was done Jiraiya had passed out from shock and pleasure, and Naruto then left to the village.
“See you later ero sannin…call me if you need me!” finally that pervert’s weakness does me some good hehehe.
In a forest just outside the hidden village of the grass were Suigetsu, Karin, Juugo and Sasuke.
“Hey Sasuke where are we off to next?” Karin asked.
“Why are you so damn anxious to leave all of a sudden? We just got here a few minutes ago so why don’t you relax.” Suigetsu responded to Karin as Suigetsu just wanted to rest up after their encounter with Juugo.
“Both of you just relax, we will get moving in an hour or so and see where we have to go next after Karin tracks Kisame and Itachi’s chakra so we can pursue them.” Sasuke tried to keep order between the group for now interrupting their childish argument.
“Now more importantly I’m sure you three now that my brother Itachi and his partner Kisame are in an organisation called the Akatsuki. The Akatsuki is an organisation who has nine members as far as I know but there could be even more or even less, their goals are undetermined to anyone as of now but one thing is for that if my brother Uchiha Itachi is in this organisation they will more than likely start to target us if we begin to pose as a problem against them.” Sasuke gave a brief description of the Akatsuki organisation and how they may be a disturbance to their plans.
“Alright so what? All we got to do is wipe everyone of those buggers out one by one and then when your bother Itachi is all but left alone we take him out.” Suigetsu’s suggestion was shot down quickly by Sasuke.
“Suigetsu if you try anything like that we will be the one’s who will be wiped out. These guys are specially recruited because of their special techniques and are all S-rank criminals, so they’re kind of like us because I wanted you three because of your abilities but there are four of us and 9 of them and they are more than likely higher in skill than us.” Sasuke explained why Suigetsu’s suggestion was so flawed.
“Hey wait a minute, how the hell do you know so much about these hacks? weren’t you supervised 24/7 by that freak Orochimaru?” Suigetsu was surprised at Sasuke’s outside knowledge even with those three years of training with Orochimaru.
“It’s simple actually, Orochimaru used to be a fellow member of these “hacks” you call them and he told me all about them but never gave any deep details because he was probably afraid I would abandon him and search for power there.” Sasuke gave an entire explanation about the whole situation and cleared everything up.
“Suigetsu your so clueless, here Sasuke knows all about these Akatsuki guys and here you stand baffled like an idiot just standing there not doing anything like you usually are.” Karin scolded at Suigetsu immediately.
“Shut up Karin! He also wasn’t in a damn cage for three years…and since you seem to know so much about them why don’t you shed some more light on the topic?” Suigetsu knew fully well Karin knew nothing about Akatsuki so he tried to make her look dumb in front of everyone.
“Hey Sasuke should we get going now?” Karin quickly hanged the subject. “Alright I guess it is time to head out…wake up Juugo for me will you Suigetsu?” Sasuke said.
“Are you kidding wake him up yourself!” Suigetsu was still scared of Juugo losing control like he did earlier and demolished everything on his sight.
“Suigetsu you big baby I’ll do it for you then.” Karin made her way over and gently woke Juugo up. “hey what’s going on Sasuke? Juugo asked.
“We’re heading out get ready.” Sasuke rounded everyone up and they started to head out to the hidden village of the rock.
At the Akatsuki base they discuss where their plans are at and they discuss the situation about Hidan and Kakuzu.
“So is everyone here?” Deidara asked.
“Yes it seems as though we can finally start the meeting.” The leader replied.
“So as you all know I’ve told you that the pairing of Hidan and Kakuzu are dead.” the leader started to talk about the deaths of the two members.
“So what are we going to do about it? Kisame asked the leader.
“Well right now our main priority is for us to retrieve their rings and bring them back here so that if we have the chance to recruit a new member we have the rings to give them and we need them for the bijuu extraction.” The leader began to say his action plan to the group and what they will do.
“For this specific mission I’m going to send Zetsu to go and retrieve both of their rings and return here immediately.” the leader appointed Zetsu due to his camouflage skills.
“When Zetsu returns we will send the team of Deidara and Tobi to retrieve the ring of Orochimaru…and if he resists take him down with all your force because he is a tough opponent for anyone.” the leader’s plan had began to unfold.
“Alright this meeting has come to and end resume your posts.”
Back in Konoha Naruto entered the town and started to search for his friends. As Naruto was walking down the streets he passed the ramen shop and his stomach began to rumble.
“Aww man I’m soooo hungry but I have no money…that greedy ero sannin used my money to gamble and buy sake.” Naruto was frustrated and starving so all he could do has wait outside and stare at the steamy fresh ramen.
“Don’t have enough money again eh Naruto? One of these days your going to have to pay for me ha-ha.” When Naruto looked up it was Kakashi.
“Kakashi sensei! Thank goodness you’re here I don’t have any money an-” Kakashi cut Naruto off “ha-ha don’t worry about it it’s on me this time Naruto I’ll put it on, um your tab I guess.” Kakashi and Naruto laughed and shared a bowl of ramen together.
“It’s been a while though hasn’t it sensei? With all my training I’ve been extremely busy with ero sannin, he’s been pushing me and pushing me until I can’t breathe.” Just of the thought Naruto began to tire.
“Well I guess Jiraiya can be a bit harsh sometimes but try and keep your spirits up, and one day you might even become the Hokage if you keep training under him…after all he is a legendary sannin Naruto, you should be more respectful of him.” Kakashi lectured Naruto on how to respect his elders and how he should appreciate everything Jiraiya has done for him.
“I’ll try Kakashi sensei, well I should get going I really want to see how everyone else is doing…thanks sensei I’ll pay you back later!” as Naruto was shouting at Kakashi he ran off to see his friends. Kakashi thought to himself Naruto you never change do you. Naruto began to walk up the streets of Konoha and look to see if he could spot one of his friends. All of a sudden Naruto spotted Rock Lee and Tenten eating at one of the restaurants in Konoha and Lee was all dressed up and same with Tenten. Naruto rushed in to say hi.
“Hey guys I haven’t seen you two in a while how’s it going? And why are you two so dressed up…are you meeting Tsunade?” Naruto asked both Lee and Tenten what they were doing.
“Um Naruto we’re on a date, me and Tenten have been dating for two weeks now.” Rock lee answered as Naruto couldn’t help but look surprised.
“Naruto what’s the matter? Are you okay?” Tenten asked.
“Well I just never pictured the two of you together, I mean I barely see you to begin with Tenten and Lee is always training.” Naruto still was kind of surprised.
“Well we’re just having dinner here but would you like to join us Naruto?” Lee asked.
“No thanks I just had some ramen with Kakashi sensei.” Naruto rubbed his stomach and had another thought about ramen.
“That’s amazing! The bond between a student and a sensei, it’s truly moving!” Rock lee started to cry out of joy.
“I think I should head out, do you know where Sakura is by any chance?” Naruto asked.
“Last time I saw her she was in the Hokage’s office getting a mission, she was looking for you also.” Rock lee replied.
“Okay thank you Lee I’ll go find her now, see you later Tenten.” Naruto busted out of the restaurant and ran up to Tsunade’s office to see her and Sakura and to see why Sakura Wanted to see him.
“Sakura I have a special mission for you and for that Naruto but I guess we have to wait for him to come here if he realizes I’m looking for him.” Tsunade and Sakura sat and waited for Naruto and then all of a sudden he ran in.
“I’m here granny Tsunade!” Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs.
“Naruto you idiot how dare you refer to the Hokage like that, how disrespectful of you!.” Sakura punched Naruto in the faced and tried to shut him up.
“Thank you Sakura, and Naruto be quiet I have a mission for you both and it’s very important that you two complete this one.” Tsunade started to explain the mission to Sakura and Naruto.
“So what’s our mission Granny? It better not be a dumb C-rank mission again.” Naruto started to complain and then Sakura stopped him from saying anything stupid again.
“Alright you two enough, your mission will be given to you immediately but it will only be Naruto and you so it’s all more important that you to co-operate and work together.” Tsunade took a deep breath and said
“ Your mission is to-”
“Alright Zetsu move out and retrieve the rings and then we move to phase two of the mission.” The leader sent Zetsu out on his mission
“So we’re finally in the hidden village of the Rock are we? So what now Sasuke?”
Next Chapter Naruto and Sakura get their mission, Zetsu sets out to get the rings of Hidan and Kakuzu and Team snake arrives in the hidden village of the rock.
If a moderator reads this or an Admin, may you guys change the title of the fanfic to "A New Dawn Breaks" ? I mistakenly put "A New Generation" because that is the sequel to this fanfic that I am currently working on and it is stuck in my mind. So if you guys could change the title it would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
Authors Note: Just to let everyone know I wrote this just over a year ago and it was my first attempt at any sort of fanfic, or developmental writing. So the description/imagery is somewhat lacking. However, the ideas are there, and in future chapters there is significant improvement (or so I am told) so please don't be scared off early on. Anyways here you go, enjoy!
A New Dawn Breaks. Chapter 1: Old Friends, New Assignment!
“Try Harder Naruto!” Jiraiya shouted at Naruto while they were busy training to develop and complete the Rasen shuriken.
“Hey ero sannin is it time for a break yet…you’ve been working me day in and day out.” Naruto was on his knees gasping for air and favouring his right arm as it was in pain due to it being overworked.
“Well I do guess you have been working hard enough…so I’ll give you the rest of the day off.” Jiraiya finally gave in and gave Naruto his break for the day so he can rest up for tomorrows training again.
“Finally, now I can see how everyone else is doing” Naruto was just leaving the training grounds of where they were training right when Jiraiya stopped him for a moment.
“Hey Naruto wait for a second, you can go…but on one condition.” Jiraiya grinned at Naruto while Naruto was anxious to get out of there and relax for the first time in a long time.
“Aww c’mon ero sannin, you said I could go now please let me go” as Naruto awaited Jiraiya’s request all Jiraiya could do was grin.
“Okay here’s the deal Naruto, I need you to perform that jutsu you’ve been practising for me.” Jiraiya has a big smile on his face awaiting Naruto’s answer.
“You mean the one you said to never use on you? But doesn’t that disobey your very own orders?” Naruto looked very puzzled due to Jiraiya’s decision.
“Yes! I know that Naruto just do as I say and you can go and do as you please.” Jiraiya was starting to get frustrated and impatient so Naruto finally decided to perform his jutsu.
“Alright whatever you say ero sannin, just remember you asked me to do this…HAREM NO JUTSU!” Naruto performed the jutsu summoning countless women flaunting around Jiraiya for a few moments. When the Jutsu was done Jiraiya had passed out from shock and pleasure, and Naruto then left to the village.
“See you later ero sannin…call me if you need me!” finally that pervert’s weakness does me some good hehehe.
In a forest just outside the hidden village of the grass were Suigetsu, Karin, Juugo and Sasuke.
“Hey Sasuke where are we off to next?” Karin asked.
“Why are you so damn anxious to leave all of a sudden? We just got here a few minutes ago so why don’t you relax.” Suigetsu responded to Karin as Suigetsu just wanted to rest up after their encounter with Juugo.
“Both of you just relax, we will get moving in an hour or so and see where we have to go next after Karin tracks Kisame and Itachi’s chakra so we can pursue them.” Sasuke tried to keep order between the group for now interrupting their childish argument.
“Now more importantly I’m sure you three now that my brother Itachi and his partner Kisame are in an organisation called the Akatsuki. The Akatsuki is an organisation who has nine members as far as I know but there could be even more or even less, their goals are undetermined to anyone as of now but one thing is for that if my brother Uchiha Itachi is in this organisation they will more than likely start to target us if we begin to pose as a problem against them.” Sasuke gave a brief description of the Akatsuki organisation and how they may be a disturbance to their plans.
“Alright so what? All we got to do is wipe everyone of those buggers out one by one and then when your bother Itachi is all but left alone we take him out.” Suigetsu’s suggestion was shot down quickly by Sasuke.
“Suigetsu if you try anything like that we will be the one’s who will be wiped out. These guys are specially recruited because of their special techniques and are all S-rank criminals, so they’re kind of like us because I wanted you three because of your abilities but there are four of us and 9 of them and they are more than likely higher in skill than us.” Sasuke explained why Suigetsu’s suggestion was so flawed.
“Hey wait a minute, how the hell do you know so much about these hacks? weren’t you supervised 24/7 by that freak Orochimaru?” Suigetsu was surprised at Sasuke’s outside knowledge even with those three years of training with Orochimaru.
“It’s simple actually, Orochimaru used to be a fellow member of these “hacks” you call them and he told me all about them but never gave any deep details because he was probably afraid I would abandon him and search for power there.” Sasuke gave an entire explanation about the whole situation and cleared everything up.
“Suigetsu your so clueless, here Sasuke knows all about these Akatsuki guys and here you stand baffled like an idiot just standing there not doing anything like you usually are.” Karin scolded at Suigetsu immediately.
“Shut up Karin! He also wasn’t in a damn cage for three years…and since you seem to know so much about them why don’t you shed some more light on the topic?” Suigetsu knew fully well Karin knew nothing about Akatsuki so he tried to make her look dumb in front of everyone.
“Hey Sasuke should we get going now?” Karin quickly hanged the subject. “Alright I guess it is time to head out…wake up Juugo for me will you Suigetsu?” Sasuke said.
“Are you kidding wake him up yourself!” Suigetsu was still scared of Juugo losing control like he did earlier and demolished everything on his sight.
“Suigetsu you big baby I’ll do it for you then.” Karin made her way over and gently woke Juugo up. “hey what’s going on Sasuke? Juugo asked.
“We’re heading out get ready.” Sasuke rounded everyone up and they started to head out to the hidden village of the rock.
At the Akatsuki base they discuss where their plans are at and they discuss the situation about Hidan and Kakuzu.
“So is everyone here?” Deidara asked.
“Yes it seems as though we can finally start the meeting.” The leader replied.
“So as you all know I’ve told you that the pairing of Hidan and Kakuzu are dead.” the leader started to talk about the deaths of the two members.
“So what are we going to do about it? Kisame asked the leader.
“Well right now our main priority is for us to retrieve their rings and bring them back here so that if we have the chance to recruit a new member we have the rings to give them and we need them for the bijuu extraction.” The leader began to say his action plan to the group and what they will do.
“For this specific mission I’m going to send Zetsu to go and retrieve both of their rings and return here immediately.” the leader appointed Zetsu due to his camouflage skills.
“When Zetsu returns we will send the team of Deidara and Tobi to retrieve the ring of Orochimaru…and if he resists take him down with all your force because he is a tough opponent for anyone.” the leader’s plan had began to unfold.
“Alright this meeting has come to and end resume your posts.”
Back in Konoha Naruto entered the town and started to search for his friends. As Naruto was walking down the streets he passed the ramen shop and his stomach began to rumble.
“Aww man I’m soooo hungry but I have no money…that greedy ero sannin used my money to gamble and buy sake.” Naruto was frustrated and starving so all he could do has wait outside and stare at the steamy fresh ramen.
“Don’t have enough money again eh Naruto? One of these days your going to have to pay for me ha-ha.” When Naruto looked up it was Kakashi.
“Kakashi sensei! Thank goodness you’re here I don’t have any money an-” Kakashi cut Naruto off “ha-ha don’t worry about it it’s on me this time Naruto I’ll put it on, um your tab I guess.” Kakashi and Naruto laughed and shared a bowl of ramen together.
“It’s been a while though hasn’t it sensei? With all my training I’ve been extremely busy with ero sannin, he’s been pushing me and pushing me until I can’t breathe.” Just of the thought Naruto began to tire.
“Well I guess Jiraiya can be a bit harsh sometimes but try and keep your spirits up, and one day you might even become the Hokage if you keep training under him…after all he is a legendary sannin Naruto, you should be more respectful of him.” Kakashi lectured Naruto on how to respect his elders and how he should appreciate everything Jiraiya has done for him.
“I’ll try Kakashi sensei, well I should get going I really want to see how everyone else is doing…thanks sensei I’ll pay you back later!” as Naruto was shouting at Kakashi he ran off to see his friends. Kakashi thought to himself Naruto you never change do you. Naruto began to walk up the streets of Konoha and look to see if he could spot one of his friends. All of a sudden Naruto spotted Rock Lee and Tenten eating at one of the restaurants in Konoha and Lee was all dressed up and same with Tenten. Naruto rushed in to say hi.
“Hey guys I haven’t seen you two in a while how’s it going? And why are you two so dressed up…are you meeting Tsunade?” Naruto asked both Lee and Tenten what they were doing.
“Um Naruto we’re on a date, me and Tenten have been dating for two weeks now.” Rock lee answered as Naruto couldn’t help but look surprised.
“Naruto what’s the matter? Are you okay?” Tenten asked.
“Well I just never pictured the two of you together, I mean I barely see you to begin with Tenten and Lee is always training.” Naruto still was kind of surprised.
“Well we’re just having dinner here but would you like to join us Naruto?” Lee asked.
“No thanks I just had some ramen with Kakashi sensei.” Naruto rubbed his stomach and had another thought about ramen.
“That’s amazing! The bond between a student and a sensei, it’s truly moving!” Rock lee started to cry out of joy.
“I think I should head out, do you know where Sakura is by any chance?” Naruto asked.
“Last time I saw her she was in the Hokage’s office getting a mission, she was looking for you also.” Rock lee replied.
“Okay thank you Lee I’ll go find her now, see you later Tenten.” Naruto busted out of the restaurant and ran up to Tsunade’s office to see her and Sakura and to see why Sakura Wanted to see him.
“Sakura I have a special mission for you and for that Naruto but I guess we have to wait for him to come here if he realizes I’m looking for him.” Tsunade and Sakura sat and waited for Naruto and then all of a sudden he ran in.
“I’m here granny Tsunade!” Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs.
“Naruto you idiot how dare you refer to the Hokage like that, how disrespectful of you!.” Sakura punched Naruto in the faced and tried to shut him up.
“Thank you Sakura, and Naruto be quiet I have a mission for you both and it’s very important that you two complete this one.” Tsunade started to explain the mission to Sakura and Naruto.
“So what’s our mission Granny? It better not be a dumb C-rank mission again.” Naruto started to complain and then Sakura stopped him from saying anything stupid again.
“Alright you two enough, your mission will be given to you immediately but it will only be Naruto and you so it’s all more important that you to co-operate and work together.” Tsunade took a deep breath and said
“ Your mission is to-”
“Alright Zetsu move out and retrieve the rings and then we move to phase two of the mission.” The leader sent Zetsu out on his mission
“So we’re finally in the hidden village of the Rock are we? So what now Sasuke?”
Next Chapter Naruto and Sakura get their mission, Zetsu sets out to get the rings of Hidan and Kakuzu and Team snake arrives in the hidden village of the rock.
If a moderator reads this or an Admin, may you guys change the title of the fanfic to "A New Dawn Breaks" ? I mistakenly put "A New Generation" because that is the sequel to this fanfic that I am currently working on and it is stuck in my mind. So if you guys could change the title it would be greatly appreciated, thanks.