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[Thoza]

Hate People
Just Lay Down On The floor
Smoke, Drink Some Coffee

Gain Friend
With Love And Bealiver
All Just Blessed With Pain
Just Sorrow

Foolish Attidute
Full With Darkness
Get Fool By Love

Get Love,
Never Have Chance To Kiss
Never HaVe Chance To LOving
Just Melts wIth Shadow
Blow Off With WinD

[Ariya]

It's okay. The grammar could use a lot of work. Other than that, it's good.

[Thoza]

Well Thank You........
Rock On !!!!

[silkshadow]

yeah keep trying and your word play will get alot better