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Shi-chan
02-04-2009, 07:38 PM
We were fed lies, concealed as truths,
Like me,the lies were true,
because we believed them,
All along the truth was a lie, made true,
we believed the truth that covered the lie,
so it wasn't a lie at all
Made real by the one who told it, the one who heard it.
It didn't exist, like me,
Was I a lie made true by belief?
I thought I knew the lie that was true,
But that was another lie,
Fake like me.
So the truth was a lie,
and the lie was the truth,
Like me they were moved and retold,
So I was the truth, because I was a lie
that everyone believed

The lie was a truth, concealed as a lie, and again,
Told as a truth.
So you were right from the beginning.
Do you understand?

cutieB
02-05-2009, 03:06 AM
nope but eventually i will it's really great and i like it. so keep making more confusing poems.^.^

LoKiWorlD
02-05-2009, 03:19 AM
This is by far the best "piece" i've read in the creative writing forum. I love this kindof thinking!! BrAvO!!!!

acelomado
02-05-2009, 09:45 AM
Yeaahhh, this is the mescaline's effect... hi hi hi hi hi ha ha ha ha haha
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Shi-chan
02-07-2009, 11:37 PM
glad you liked it.