Poem NP

[Neophoenix]

Hit high and low trouble and pain followes rejections from love and life letting everything slip by leaving reality and my feet but when reiality hits and it hits hard you fall back to hell in the end we are all pawnes in a game of life led one way than the other the only one who dosn't hurt you is your mother but not forever move on survive and when it comes down you can leave to a better place when it comes misery begone no more lfe can sore reilty dies than you look at me you can can returne.

[Neophoenix]

Hope you guy can get the message

[Ryuuzaki]

Not that great. Didn't seem to flow together, the way it's written is wrong, and no double posting. <3 Keep at it, though. I'm sure with practice, you'll get it down.

[Utauh]

that poem is really good, i might recommend all my friends that but...i would say you still need a bit more details in it so it would make it even more interesting ^^

[Neophoenix]

thanks I 'll try to do that next time!!!

[acelomado]

Ohhh, this broken my heart. hi hi hi hi ha ha ha ha ha
http://www.animefuel.com/forum/picture.php?albumid=1256&pictureid=15595

[Neophoenix]

Dude Your Picture Rocks